Awesome fic
Really loved those inner selves of naruto and sasuke

update please

CONTINUEEEEE I LOVEE THISSSS

I just finished reading this and I'm like "WHAT THERE'S NO MORE?" I demand to know where the rest of this AMAZING story is. PLEASE finish this! :'(

When you have a chance you should really consider finishing this. The story is so great. Taking the 'typical' high school setting with sasunaru and writing something new and brilliant is hard - and you've pulled it off perfectly. I would love to read the end of the story.
By the way, I think your writing is wonderful. You have real talent.

why didn't you finish the story i wanna keep reading it ! finish por favor please

Please come back and finish this I loved it a lot . It made me laugh too please please please come back

You have to fishen you just to! I mean this is one of the best storyies I have readvin awhile and for it just stop! I'm just trying not to lose my mind right niw o and the walmart chatper was so brilliant omg I almost lost it when gaara asked were the anti depressants were holding that gun dear god it was funny and when naruto did the cheeses burger thing I just died you must must must updated I mean come on I must know what happens with naruto ana sasuke now and before I was ok with the frist 3 ending like that but then you did more omg now I'm just going nuts with wonder plz plz plz plz plz for the of all yaio goodness update! Cuz we must know what's going to happen

Oh, damn.

Suki-chan

And i hate you sooooo much right now. I could have handled it. I could have handled the knowledge that this story was incomplete... IF you had left off with that carnival chapter. Yes, i wanted more romance and fluff, but i could have accepted things as they were... but nooooo! You had to set up this perfect "lost in the woods" scenario, and then you let your lazy streak kick in and now i am screwed! Dammit!

Why must you do this to me? I have read all 22 chapters and for what? Never getting to know what happens? Who is gaara gonna date? What about my poor kiba? When will naruto stop being an idiot and just rape sasuke! Stupid blonde is so lucky, and he doesn't even appreciate it! Gah!

Oh, and btw, you should probably be happy i waited to read this until now, cause i totally called one of the twins being a master manipulator. :P

I'm not fond of snakes.. ," Ugghh I can't sleep tonight. Would there be snakes slipping through my blanket?! *coldshivers*
Poor Kiba, do u have a grudge on him or what?

OmG!
Should have finished this story years ago, but delayed for some unknown reason. But the good thing now is that I am finished, which I'm very glad about because this story happen to be oddly hilarious. In a good way. Really very funny, I practically laughed every other word or sentence. Really enjoyed reading it.
GOOD JOB
:D
Angel-Chan

D: omg I love this story . I really wanna see what happends next. This is a really great first story, your a really great writer. I give it a AAAAAA

This story is funny,clever and witty well written and easy to follow. A bit more detail and romance or romantic climax/reveal but super funny and cute and an amazing read. So READ IT

this was actually a decent first chapter and would love to read the rest