Great Story.I love Chris and Bianca happy together Stories.

I’m putting together a rec list for my favorite Charmed stories, so I thought I would share what I wrote for this one! I love it so I don’t like stories where Chris is made to be super powerful, because he wasn’t in canon, and I think he was more interesting for it. This story is my exception, because the power Chris holds here is incredible beyond belief but not obvious, and entirely different from the kind of power Wyatt has. He has something that would have ruined anyone else. Really what’s so fascinating is this whole idea that Chris is the incorruptible one, because he can walk in the shades of grey without falling to evil, while Wyatt will always have to be one or the other. I think it’s one of the most brilliant stories in this fandom. It does amazing things with the Chris and Bianca relationship, as well.

Very good! Too bad there’s no sequel!

I adored this fic and it was wonderful!

I really loved this story. Probably one of my favorites! I wish you had done a sequel.

So this was fantastic
Seriously, I loved it! It was refreshing to see Bianca in a major role for once. I really liked your characterization choices at well. Like, I enjoyed Wyatt channeling Darth Vader but otherwise failing at acting evil.
All in all, this is great

Why you never continue the history. We love this fic and want more history pleeasee.

Porfavor continuala es simplemente asombrosa y me encana el bianca/chris n.n

beautiful story... i loved Gideon explanation... it makes a little bit more of sense... Gideon was too bad without a really good reason.

Chris and Bianca are amazing together. and i loved the ending scene between Piper and Bianca...
the only thing this story misses a little bit, is more scenes with Piper.
But really, congratulations, this is one of the best Charmed fanfics I ever read.

Happy reader! happy review! Happy writer! ;)

This was amazing. One of the best stories I have ever read. Lots of action, some time with his best woman, a real partnership there, and loved the scenes here at the end with Chris, the Elders, and the Source of Good, Piper and Bianca, and the siblings on the bridge. Lots of family, lots of angst, but it worked out in the end. I've read other stories where Chris is written in as an advisor to Wyatt and seen more as Camelot. I rather like the Merlin reference better and it suits. I am searching out the sequel now.

Wow. You deserve a standing ovation. It has been a very long time since I read a fic of this quality! You did absolutely amazing with the characters, no one felt OOC and no one was uselessly dragged in. You even made me like Leo & good!Wyatt, two characters I never really gave much attention to. One of my favorite scenes was Leo's speech when he was in the overworld with Gideon.

You even did great with making major characters stay on the side lines of the story but gave them enough attention that they weren't forgotten. The scene at the end with Piper and Bianca was heartwarming.

I also came to like your OCs, Ms. McCarthy is an awesome person, I remember having a teacher like her. Mel, even though technically not an OC was also enjoyable, easily fitting into the world. And again I like how she didn't try to butt into the spot light.

The world (and how the timelines work) was very creative. I like how you showed that time was still moving for other people even though (or perhaps because) the sections were written titled with their dates.

The Pale man. He was a good villain. Revealing his game plan so early, made him much more interesting a character because I don't have to question 'what's he doing' but 'why' and then that was revealed and everyone got to business. I love that so much. His attitude was kinda annoying, but that it annoyed the protagonists too added to his charm and made hope he wasn't some pawn or killed too early. That he was insane (or clear minded since the two are mistaken for each other) added bonus points to his villain likeability.

Dialogue, hands down you did great. The words they spoke and how you had them speak always painted a clear picture of the atmosphere.

The source of all good not being Chris was also an interesting addition as well as her backstory. The only thing I didn't like was that she lied about the time powers. It seemed convoluted, as she could've explained it to him instead of further strengthening his belief on the 'higher powers' characters. Besides that I still liked her.

I feel like I'm on a tangent, so overall: Amazing story, simply the best I've read in a long time and insta fav. Idk if you made a sequel or even more charmed stories but I would love to read them.

Keep on keepin on!
-l3largus
p.s. Here's a basket full of muffins for each chapter and about 7 more for making a generally awesome story.

This story may be the best Chris fict I've ever read. You're characters are spot on, and I love how you handled the Bianca Chris relationship, something that is either glossed over or ignored in most fanfiction. Please write the sequel!

What happened to the sequel? I was really looking forward to it.

I love, love, love LOVE this. I think you got each and every one of the characters down perfectly. I love the storyline, and the details, and basically everything about it haha!

Great job!

This was an amazingly written story, I really liked how you gave the right feel of all the characters. Thank you for sharing this!

i love it, you should do a sequel