Reviews for Isabella Marie Potter |
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RedInTheHead chapter 15 . 10/7/2017 Honestly I dont like the Izzy/Snape. Its sweet and everything but I dont think it fits in the story. And i preffer the normal Snape. Makes him more interesting. |
RedInTheHead chapter 5 . 10/7/2017 Im very upset you put her in slytherin. She had no qualities matching slythertin! |
Cullenpotterjackson18 chapter 3 . 4/19/2017 WHY DID YOU REMOVE HARRY?! HE WOULD'VE MADE ECERYTHING SOOO MUCH BETTER. |
MapleTeaPlease chapter 11 . 10/25/2016 Hello. Awesome story so far. But you want to know something really annoying about this fanfiction website? I am interested in plants so I looked at some schools that are based around herbology (YES, I am not crazy, it is a real thing) and now whenever I come on here, guess what EVERY SINGLE AD SAYS? 'Herbalist Degree', 'Schools of Herbology', 'Herbalist Schools'. . . Help me. Too. Many. Ads. ANYWAYS. . . I'm kind of glad you didn't add Harry in. I mean, I just think he wouldn't fit into the story too well, but that's my opinion. Besides, we'll never know until we see. Oh my lord I sound like Dumbledore okay bye gunna go to a mental hospital before I become a Dumbledore. Your scared reader, Maple |
LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 4 . 10/18/2016 Hmm the drama isn't a bad thing. I would however recommend playing simulations in your mind several times before you write. The kind of abuse she's been through doesn't shake off that fast. If anything, she would likely still be shaking in fear, the childish enthusiasm she's displaying usually does not return for months to several years in the strongest of people. The main character is rebelling the moment hagrid shows up as if what she's been through was only 1 punch... You also skipped the alley scene. But tell me, Harry Potter just looked small. This girl, had a messed up face. Don't you think reactions would have been VASTLY different this time around ? At the very least the newspapers would be writing trash already. |
Mashrose chapter 1 . 6/28/2016 Don't put Harry as one of your characters when your summary states very clearly he isn't there. I specifically searched for Harry as a character to be in the story and seeing yours there is very annoying. |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/24/2015 Yay! Loving severus! |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/21/2015 Ok I'm not gonna critidize but y slytheryn (sort 4 spelling) |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/23/2014 The slytherins are ooc they are supposed to be. Mean u made em kind |
SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 3/17/2014 The US government in all their wisdom has come up with a law called Stop Online Piracy Acts (SOPA). It’s basically a blanket law to stop ALL forms of online piracy including fan fiction, fan art, and fan videos! So they punish those that they want to punish. BUT they also punish all of us who express our creativity through writing, drawing, and recording around something that may not belong to us, but that we LOVE. There is a Petition on WE the People that ends on the 19th of March that needs 100,000 signatures. So far we have 89,074. If you want to sign, go to: .gov/petition/stop-sopa-2014/q0Vkk0Zr |
wismann chapter 5 . 11/17/2013 Why i hope she gets to be in Gryffindor |
sevgirl519 chapter 7 . 10/12/2013 Can I please Beta for you? You have so many minor errors! I really hate that she is a slytherian Blaise is supposed to be their age BLAH sorry I feel mean! I love your story its great. just annoying me |
sevgirl519 chapter 6 . 10/12/2013 Ron is a dick |
sevgirl519 chapter 3 . 10/12/2013 hey great story.. love it! just a suggestion... malfoy be switched with edward and the cullens be slytherians OR the weaslys are switched with the cullens ether way GET THEM IN HERE! I NEED MY JAZ AND EDWARD! |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2013 \/ |