Reviews for Isabella Marie Potter
RedInTheHead chapter 15 . 10/7/2017
Honestly I dont like the Izzy/Snape. Its sweet and everything but I dont think it fits in the story. And i preffer the normal Snape. Makes him more interesting.
RedInTheHead chapter 5 . 10/7/2017
Im very upset you put her in slytherin. She had no qualities matching slythertin!
Cullenpotterjackson18 chapter 3 . 4/19/2017
WHY DID YOU REMOVE HARRY?! HE WOULD'VE MADE ECERYTHING SOOO MUCH BETTER.
MapleTeaPlease chapter 11 . 10/25/2016
Hello. Awesome story so far. But you want to know something really annoying about this fanfiction website? I am interested in plants so I looked at some schools that are based around herbology (YES, I am not crazy, it is a real thing) and now whenever I come on here, guess what EVERY SINGLE AD SAYS? 'Herbalist Degree', 'Schools of Herbology', 'Herbalist Schools'. . . Help me. Too. Many. Ads.

ANYWAYS. . . I'm kind of glad you didn't add Harry in. I mean, I just think he wouldn't fit into the story too well, but that's my opinion. Besides, we'll never know until we see. Oh my lord I sound like Dumbledore okay bye gunna go to a mental hospital before I become a Dumbledore.

Your scared reader,
Maple
LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 4 . 10/18/2016
Hmm the drama isn't a bad thing.

I would however recommend playing simulations in your mind several times before you write.
The kind of abuse she's been through doesn't shake off that fast. If anything, she would likely still be shaking in fear, the childish enthusiasm she's displaying usually does not return for months to several years in the strongest of people. The main character is rebelling the moment hagrid shows up as if what she's been through was only 1 punch...

You also skipped the alley scene. But tell me, Harry Potter just looked small. This girl, had a messed up face. Don't you think reactions would have been VASTLY different this time around ? At the very least the newspapers would be writing trash already.
Mashrose chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Don't put Harry as one of your characters when your summary states very clearly he isn't there. I specifically searched for Harry as a character to be in the story and seeing yours there is very annoying.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/24/2015
Yay! Loving severus!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/21/2015
Ok I'm not gonna critidize but y slytheryn (sort 4 spelling)
Guest chapter 6 . 7/23/2014
The slytherins are ooc they are supposed to be. Mean u made em kind
SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
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wismann chapter 5 . 11/17/2013
Why i hope she gets to be in Gryffindor
sevgirl519 chapter 7 . 10/12/2013
Can I please Beta for you? You have so many minor errors!
I really hate that she is a slytherian
Blaise is supposed to be their age
BLAH sorry I feel mean!
I love your story its great. just annoying me
sevgirl519 chapter 6 . 10/12/2013
Ron is a dick
sevgirl519 chapter 3 . 10/12/2013
hey
great story.. love it!
just a suggestion... malfoy be switched with edward and the cullens be slytherians
OR
the weaslys are switched with the cullens
ether way GET THEM IN HERE! I NEED MY JAZ AND EDWARD!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2013
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