Reviews for The Twins and Karma
blue.bitter.rabbit chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
That was absolutely brilliant! The ending was great :D
claraowl chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
*bursts into hysterical laughter*
Yeah... karma is a buttmunch. :)
Rin chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I love it!
AnimeGirl45xoxo chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Love this story :)
spottedfire98 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
hehehe, nice story :)
Oldoldoldoldold chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
The Cheshire cat from hell? whered you get that from thats the most hilarious thing i've ever heard!
FlowerJinx chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
ahh that is so funny i could actually see that happening
poison innocence chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Haha! This was fun 2 read. Are there gonna be more chapters? I hope so. Thx 4 writting
Ayaka Mizushima chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
This is really funny, but cute at the same time.
AnnaMaeBeauty chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
chesire cat from hell! love it! that should be on a t-shirt, "Chesire Cat From Hell"
AnimePrincess19 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
great story the end was the funniest part
Mimi-dudette chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Sweet story! Everyone seemed in character (even if Haru was a bit grumpy XD)and it has a really cute plot. Hika's reaction to Haruhi saying Kaoru was cuter was so funny X3

Is there going to be more? This seems like it can be a good multi-chaptered story :D

~Mimi x
RadAcid chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Well it looks as if I'm the first reviewer for this story, so here goes nothing:

I really like the story plot, the pay-back seems like something the twins would actually do. I'm just wondering what the twins actually did to Haruhi or what they want her to think. This is a good story in my eyes. There is just two errors I see. In line eight with Kaoru speaking and line forty-three, the line right after Haruhi woke up. Those are the only two that I spotted. Other than that keep up the good work.

Bye for now, *Fyre-Mizt*