great work...God bless

a wonderful story. Thank you so much. i love it.

Shucks, its so bitter and sweet:)

A wonderful ending to a fastatical tale!

Yay, total bromance, and I love it! Especially "how much rope..."

Awww, the feels! Garsiv as the closet poet. He is my favorite!

In a word, wondrous. The conflict of emotions that you are able to convey is astounding!

Amazingly detailed! I really love the story!

I really enjoy the way you're telling this story from the perspectives of the various characters involved.

Okay, now I love it even more. This is wonderfully touching! And I love catchin ga glimpse of Garsiv's more emotional side.

Well that was quite the dramatic opening...I can't wait the read what happens next.

A very good story, showing the bond between the brothers and just how strong it is. Showing very deep emotions, that pulls the reader in and gives insight to each of the character. It was good.

I love it! I always did like the brother scenes in the movie.

I just wish there was a chapter about the King interacting with his sons.

Favorite.

One small inconsistency: why would Tamina be willing to give her life to return the dagger to the gods if she knows a way to destroy it?

Nice story.

Awesome fic you wrote here. I love the brotherly comradere. Just loved it!