| Reviews for The Mercenary |
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  Borello chapter 92 . 6/14 the story is confusing but really good. i hoped to read more chapter. |
 manny0101 chapter 6 . 12/8/2019 So damn confusing! The fuck is even happening?! Who are these people? Humans? Wolves? Summon animals? |
| Prasanjit chapter 92 . 10/24/2019 Hey ...I like your fanfics...continue the good works ...hope you'll complete it... |
| Guest chapter 92 . 10/23/2019 Hi ...its one of the best fanfic I've read ...I hope you complete it... |
| Freddielebron chapter 10 . 7/22/2019 What the fuck is going on. I’m not sure if naruto got sent back in time somehow or what and it’s like we all missed something that the author said. If you want to be cryptic don’t have full on dialogue to confuse your audience. Be cryptic. Not explain something that no one knows what’s going on. You have to introduce a little at a time so we know what tf is going on. If we don’t know then we read a little more but then you still don’t tell us what’s going on. I’ve been confused about what’s going on since the third chapter. So he washes up somewhere and there are talking wolves that just have full on conversations with one another about something and way later do you find out that they are summons. Then these people are just introduced and there is no backstory to introduce them just a giant leap right into the middle of the story. Slow it down man. Write out a story not a movie. |
| creativesm75 chapter 92 . 8/11/2018 very good chapter |
| niningtantalus chapter 92 . 8/11/2018 sometimes it's very difficult to give review if the chapter only give very development of the story,but i will still praised you for updating,great story so far |
| creativesm75 chapter 91 . 8/5/2018 very good |
| Aetherium21 chapter 33 . 8/4/2018 Very interesting story, and although Naruto’s hero complex is expected as always it’s still vexing seeing his endless infatuation for that fool Sakura. |
| aldrenzu chapter 90 . 8/2/2018 Finally finished reading for 9th time and i can never be more amaze to see a naruto story with oc this good. Keep continuing this story plz! |
| TheOmnificentOne chapter 9 . 7/30/2018 I'm just going to assume you wrote this before the Canon explained what "sennin" was... |
| CaleDrake chapter 90 . 7/29/2018 Just found your story...benge read it...I'm in love with this story |
| Sapphire Orchid chapter 4 . 7/28/2018 wouldn't Bee be able to tell it wasn't Naruto because of the kyuubi not only that but they'd also know because of the same thing since it's only a fake corpse |
| creativesm75 chapter 90 . 7/27/2018 NICE |
| Sleep Away Today chapter 89 . 7/25/2018 Can't wait for the next update |
