Reviews for When You Have Everything to Lose
Flea Senpai chapter 10 . 6/18/2018
This is now my favorite Crenny fanfic, I came from AO3 because I couldn't have enough of this story. I hope I can read a lot more of your stories, I love them soooo much.
Tzarverich chapter 10 . 2/11/2018
I read both fics, this one and the prequel in one day, and, I must confess, this is the best Crenny fanfiction I have ever read. I just loved the way you managed the characters, how you wrote them and their dialogues, they all looked similar to their characters in the tv show and also resembled real life teenagers. I also must applaude you for knowing exactly how to manage side characters, it was never boring to read about what Token, Clyde, Tweeek, Kevin, Kyle and Stan were doing. It is common that many writers tend to make those parts extremelly dull, yet you mannaged it perfectly. The story as a whole was really interesting, having many parts that were funny and others that kept me thinking. You did an amazing job, keep up with the good work!
EllenTux chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
Thank you for such an amazing story i really love this!
Anon chapter 10 . 7/10/2017
I'm just gonna say, holy shit. I've read the fic before this and I have to say you're really talented and I love your writing. Everyone is in character, the story is so well thought out, and that everything was so real. I honestly haven't come across a fic that I've loved so much before and I really hope you write more in the future. This is a crenny masterpiece
RABBADIDIDOODA chapter 10 . 2/23/2016
I loved this story! It kept me up past midnight because I couldn't stop reading. Your stories are always good. Feel free to check out mine if you want to its a South Park and fallout 4 crossover, I'd like to hear your opinion of it.
RAEwasnthere chapter 10 . 10/16/2015
I KNOW THIS IS AN OLD FANFIC BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW HOW GREAT THIS WAS. THE CHARACTER'S PERSONAITIES WERE SPOT ON. YOU KEPT ME ON MY TOES BY THROWING ME A FEW CURVEBALLS. THE PLOT ABSOLUTELY AMAZING AND I LOVE HOW THE PLOT AND SUBLOT WEAVED TOGETHER BEFORE FINALLY BECOMING ONE AT THE END. THE CRENNY FLUFF MADE MY HEART MELT AND IT WAS GREAT. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH A GREAT FANFIC.
anon420 chapter 10 . 2/2/2015
I love this sooooo much! The dialogue is amazing and hilarious. Such a fun read. I was really hoping that the "mysterious third gay guy" was Cartman, and that he had a thing for Kyle, though. But this turned out great. Nice job!
ayeeyers chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
I really like how you wrote Kenny and Craig Very in-character As well as all the characters, to be honest. So Stan was the gay one, huh? Lol, I totally didn't see that coming. I thought it would be Cartman with all the clues you're giving out. For some reason, I wanted Kenny and Stan to have a moment because wahhh I feel bad for Stan :[[ Anyways, good job on this one! :]]
Ara chapter 10 . 12/11/2014
Awe this was really precious. This story can definitely go in my little handful of favorites :)
Guest chapter 10 . 11/18/2014
Omg. One of the greatest Crenny fics I've read in a long time. Greatly written. Literally want this to happen to me sometime. Holy crap. I love it. My favorite chaptered fic. KUDOS.
Random Reader chapter 10 . 9/13/2014
I just have to say that this fic was so satisfying to read. It had the right amount of everything and the ending was just lovely. Thank you
Muscle Man chapter 10 . 7/18/2014
Hey bro, that story you wrote? It was good. Good job.
Not A Creeper chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
This story is already getting good! (Mainly wanted to comment on the first chapter instead of finishing before commenting because dat last line. I'm going to obsess over that last line now :] Forever.)
LoveDN chapter 10 . 7/9/2014
Omg! I think I love you now. And the story. Just... you both!
That was so amazing and I didn't mind any Crenny Fluff AT ALL. So no worries about that.
I loved everything :D Stan being gay (which you could guess, even though it took me a while to figure it out, I admit), Cartman's prank and the blackmailing stuff, Claudia and Tweek and well.. I loved it! I can't believe it's over now. That was just too good and way too cute!
God, yes, my heart's still beating happily in my chest. (So much Crenny-goodness!)
So... yeah... I think I'm gonna check out your other storys now :DD
Thanks a lot for sharing this story! It was amazing! (:
Aeggdrasil chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
I really liked your whole story. I'm totally into teenage drama. Even though I could predict what was going to happen (and I really WANTED it to happen, lol) I really enjoyed reading it. It was not the final destination but the trip what got me interested in your fic
I really love Crenny and I liked how you described the relationship between them. It was so far from the cliches, so natural, sexy, funny, and kinda dramatic at the same time. Well done.
I loved the way you made the characters, it was so described, in character, vivid, and yet natural. You really introduce them in the main story without seeming forced or something. The teenage environment that you gave in the fic, the way they related, the jokes they made, the conversations they had... It made me want to be in that high school and be their friend (and it's the same feeling I have with the series).
Congratulations.
Ps. Sorry about my English. It's not my natural language.
Ps2. I loved the idea of Craig using brackets. I thought it was kinda sexy, lol.
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