Honestly other then those first chapters, this story really evolved to quite enjoyable.

Usual doesn't happen for me in this fandom.

I think Bella has right to all over the place cause she was sexually abused to the point she thought her only out was death.

I wish she would understand Edward though... She has made this dude feel like utter absolute shit and now says she loves him in the heat of the moment.. she needs to slow her roll

So if she was mouth raped? Why is she always so eager to suck cock.

And why is Jake the one she is telling all this? This isn't 'some' jake, She didn't fuck him in the begging chapters but he still very prevalent and he definitely still wants her.

This story, mostly Bella, is giving me whiplash.

One point she suicidal, a slut, a mean girl, and now all virginal and friendly.

So she really a virgin, at least.. in the sense no has penetrated that deep before? Or something cause I thought she was raped..

Also good, Edward finally had enough of her shit.

This is so fucking weird, so was she a virgin? Definitely not now...

So Bella just sucked off a dude...

Is this one of those stories that was just Bella but you changed to be Bella/Edward cause it ends that way.. so far that's what it feels like.

Ok so that ends Jake... Surprised... By the way you had it going a few chapters ago.. I wasn't expecting this, so early at least.

Meyer didn't have Bella on the verge of fucking Jacob everytime she was with him...

You can't compare this situation you are writing to canon. Bella was never Jakes girlfriend and she definitely never had a full blown make out session when she felt up his cock.

So I can assume since this is 40 chapters, she probably gonna do more then make out with Jacob.

Your summary says 'some jacob' Yet so far in this story, it would appear he is a major character.

This was one beautiful fucking story. Thank you for gracing us with its awesomness

Your writing was amazing loved the snark of Bella and really loved this story thank you

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Bella is fit for a straight jacket. I adore her. Shes my favorite Bella ever.

Thanks for the epilogue! Really enjoyed this fic although I was giving myself whiplash with my emotions...first I'm sad for Bella, then I'm mad at Bella, then I'm mad at Edward, then I love Edward, but in the end I'm happy for Edward & Bella. They did make it after all!

Thank God that was a real & sincere apology...& they’ve agreed to become friends...sounds like a good start.