This is perfect! ;)

I love this so much for so many reasons I can't even begin to explain, but I'll try.

First, well written. You can paint a picture, describe a scene without going OTT to the point that I end up just skimming it.

Second, Face and Murdock were both extremely in character.

Third; MURDOCK GOT THE GIRL! I loved that. When she wasn't initially going for Face I wondered if maybe she'd be a Murdock kinda gal, and lo and behold. . .

If you haven't already, you should write a sequel (or, dare I say, a series) of Murdock and the gal. :) This fandom is sorely lacking well written Murdock romances and you have the chops to pull it off humorously rather than melodramatically. Just a thought! I loved it though, really. Thanks for putting a smile on my face!

Hahaha, nice, love it. Good flow and dialog, and love the Im-gonna-kill-youness on the part of Face at the end.

YEA for movie Murdock hitting it off with Kelly. My favorite couple in the show!

I know you havent updated in a long long while but pleease consider writing more. I loooove you writing style and the way you portrey everyone. Please write more. Pleeeaaase.

I loved that you included Kelly from the original series. Maybe you could write a follow up sometime. :)

Haha! Awesome! Kelly makes an appearance in the movie-'verse. Just perfect. :D

Love that Face couldn't sweet talk her like he could anyone else, and that Murdock, appropriately, got the girl, or at least her number. ;)

Very nice job!

~K

Aha,

You really tickled me with this one...Murdock's almost slavish devotion to his favorite gear, the references to both Kelly Stevens (she of "Bounty") AND George Costanza, all in one go?

Lovely. Made my day. Thanks. :D

Oh goodness, I have so much love for this. The world needs more Murdock fic 3.

Did i ever mention how much i love you. Seriously you amaze me.I'm gonna keep you on the A-team kick for a while so you can pop out more of these. Write me something old school luv. Something George Peppard, Mr.T, Dwight Schultz, and Dirk Benedict would be proud of. (just don't included the women...their to annoying)