Please, continue this. It is amazing, and if you don't continue, at least post an link to another thing to follow you on. You are an amazing writer. -A fan.

I love this story so update soon plese I' read this three times now so plese do it soon

This story would be a whole lot a better if you had better spelling,grammar,flow, etc. I promise I am not at all saying this whole story was bad, no in fact some parts of it I really enjoyed! But most...I was confused. I had no idea what was going on, no idea whatsoever. before you finish this you may want to ask a beta reader to help you.

Nice

HIS AGE!?
GIMME A COOKIE!

IM FIGHTING BONETAIL! SQUARES!

Mm...great story :D continue! make chapter 12! :) and sorry but this is how ive always pictured dimentio & mimi:

Dimentio: Having darker than night black hair under his mask in his purple and yellow jester cloths (going lovely with his pale skin), floating around with his mask on, and as he takes it off u catch the gleam of his one golden eye, the other black, swiftly chasing Mimi like a newborn kitten chasing a leaf.

Mimi: (No square head, pale skin, human body) Being chased by Dimentio, crimsion eyes gleaming with excitement, and the wind blows through her green hair that is tied perfectly in pigtails. Her short yellow dress, reaching just above her knees, Flowing in air, top almost skin tight and her nails painted green. No shoes yet falls, being caught in dimentios arms. :)

No offense! Just weird seeing him different :) and fellow reviewers no stealing, gana make an account & write a story :) anyway loved it! keeeeep it up! 3 :DD

Great story.. though I am slightly lost in the plot, I suppose

You should spellcheck this more, and revise some of the grammar, just a tip

Otherwise.. this is becoming a great story, though slightly confusing at times.

YOU UPDATED ON MY BIRTHDAY 3 I've been waiting for this chapter a while now! But it was good, I can't wait to see how things unfold! Update soon :D

YAY OwO oh please continue! Can't wait for the next installment and I'll definitely want to read those two rated k and m stories W

*claps* brava I say brava. who is this new evil doer...he sounds interesting 3 poor dimmy...suffering alone and count bleck being bah...can't wait for the next chapters! OwO

ARGH! CLIFFHANGER! great chapter :)

LURRRRVE! must continue please! I am interested in this story! OWO it is an amazing story and i lurve Dimentio/Mimi ! OWO

Oh my god! I can't figure it out! Just tell us whats with Dimentio's MSN name!

I love this story! It's awesome! Write more! Write more! Write MOOOOOOOOORE!

it's not finished :I !noooooooooo

its really interesting~~ I want DIMIMI~~~~~~3