Such a cute story.

Strange? No way! Unless you don't know, let alone love Piccolo or even DBZ, this would not, should not, seem strange! I love it! And aww, nice, sweet, meaningful ending, too! Great fic!

Hey, I love this fic! Well written and actually on my favourite character! Ah, Piccolo! Nice touch on the part of Kami and Daimao! In response to your note, I don't find it confusing. Many people wondered why Piccolo stayed on Earth and I for one think it's because if he went on Namek he would've felt more of an outcast than he does on Earth, since on Earth he's got Gohan and the other fighters where on Namek he would've been the only Warrior on a planet of, let's say it, farmers and maybe some wizards!

I meant to say you gave him more depth, which he really deserves! There is more to him than just the crazy maniace...

It's wonderful... really, just the way I figure Piccolo Daimao... you gave me more depth, which he really deserves!

beautiful.

That was SO pretty. *3*

I mean... it is pretty unfathomable that a being could be nothing but evil... everyone has a reason. I wrote a somewhat similar story about Piccolo Jr. not too long ago, so this was interesting to read and to compare to my own thoughts on the matter.

You capture such longing in the heart of old Daimao. Thank you. Gracias.

AW! THAT WAS SO CUTE! i feel all warm and fuzzy inside, i luv it! you are so GOOD! gonna readit again to get back warm fuzzy feeling... sayonara

Sam

that was so KAWAI!

It made sense to me. And I like it a lot.

Of course, if it made sense, then maybe the problem is with me... hehe.

Anyway, I think it's a good story.

I like it. No flame here, your such a good writer. Piccolo is my favorite character in all the DB chronicles. Thanks for the story.

~Daffodil

::In awe:: So awesome...mesa don't really know what to say about it. Just...wow. Mesa never seen such an in-depth look at Daimao before...and it was awesome, especially what Piccolo said at the end.
Fav Lines:
"The Demon King bowed his head until it rested on his chest, grieving for things he could not remember having lost."
""Sometimes...connections...between people are more important than where they were born, or what color they are, or even," he added wryly, "how many fingers they have." At this, he held up a four-fingered hand for emphasis. "Home is here," he continued, tapping the side of the boy's head lightly, "and here," he added, tapping the left side of his chest. "As long as you remember that, you'll never get lost.""
"Living colors - as well as the one thing that he had been missing before, but had not known. The sound of a child laughing."
Well done.
YLG,
DS

I'll agree with you that this is kind of a weird story, but it's weird in a good way. I like it! Gohan and Piccolo have the coolest friendship, and I'm glad that I'm not the only one who appreciates it!

That was so great. Writing about Daimao Piccolo is so rare.

This was done really well too. I enjoyed how you presented him. Empty, lonely, tourtured. Kami always seemed a little tragic to me too.

I have to get my Piccolo story going soon, right after I finish the one I'm working on now.

You, i must say, are an extreamly gifted writer. I sugest that you write more like this fanfic. Have you ever looked into romance? Like, let's say that the old kami,(before dende)had fallen in love with a kind human girl and then became god and Daiomao went out to kill her or somethin like that. I'm just askin' you this b/c I can't write a fanfic. lol. N E way...My E-mail address is . Email me about my idea and we'll talk. Bye! keep up the good work! ;)