I really, really liked this. It was really close to everyone's character and opened little windows into all their heads. You got a lot of the moments I really wanted to know what they were thinking, too. :) Thumbs up!

Ack i just realized i didn't review this . Srry, things have been a bit crazy! But i love this! Great job with her POV! For some reason I really liked her and Ian... I've never thought of them being a couple but O_o I could actually almost see it there!

And for Riley, I'm surprised you didn't mention him saving her life! Still cute though :3 can't wait for more!

Another great ch. keep up the good work.

that was great. cant wait for ben. abby is the best.

I loved it. You really write the characters well and get into their minds. Update soon!

This was good. :) You did a good job of getting into Riley's head, and I liked the "all bright and golden and smarter than he was about a lot of things" line. :) And your spelling and grammar were impeccable. Nicely done.

The only thing that threw me off a bit was that it took me a couple paragraphs to figure out that these were Riley's impressions of everybody else, not everybody else's impressions of Riley. Just a minor quibble. :) Looking forward to reading the rest!

I liked it a lot! Really good idea.

Next up really doesn't matter, just update soon!

Interesting story so far. Keep up the good work

that was great. cant wait until ben.

Fantastic. Very in character. :)

I loved this so far xD I don't think It's out of character, you did I good job with Riley. I especially like his thing for Abigail. It was really sweet, and I kind of imagined him having a bit of a crush and Abigail when they first met. But he's a good friend and wouldn't interfere with her and Ben.

I would like to see Abigail's perceptions next. We don't get to see to much of that. Update soon!