Lol this chapter was so funny I couldn't stop laughing! My husband looked at me like I was crazy...

again something awesome from you, definitely a fav!

Aw! Those kids are more than a handful. Precocious and a riot. I laughed so much.

Sweet

Lol

This is so precious!
Happy New Year! 8D
So much love frim renzie17

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AWWWWW :')

Well, I don't think I've ever read this but either way it was fantastic. I laughed the entire time, and nearly choked on my drink at the half naked jive bit.
This actually kind of made me curious though. Seeing the Roy and Riza in such a good place, being well known throughout Amestris now, how people in Rizas hometown would react to see Riza and her infamous apprentice doing so well for themselves. Considering you and I and others have a little headcanon that Riza was not so popular back in her home town. If you ever get bored enough I'd love to see your take on the idea! Don't feel obligated to though, its just a friendly request that I don't mind you rejecting! :)
Anyway, as always wonderful. Your work never ceases to amaze!

Great story, very funny!

I love this SO much! Please write more with them!

I loved this more than I can explain. Really. It's completely amazing and I am blown away.
The humor was perfect, Olly was marvelous, and the way you wrote out the Mustang family was just fantastic.
I think my favorite piece would have to be the 'Sunday' portion of Part 3. It's a touching little thing that shows how much Olly really looks up to his father, despite his independent and smug character.
Keep up the great work.

This was fantastic! The half naked jive was just too much, that Olly is sure a character. I loved this fic. :)

More d'aaaaaawwwwwwwwwww for you!

Jeez, that Olly's a handful. Hilarious antics as usual.

Awesome story! Hahaha. Roy's son is so devious and manipulative. Like father, like son. Great, great job.