Your promises obviously mean shit.

Your Beta must be shit because you haven't bothered for more than five months.
Shame on you.

Updates getting further and further apart. Next thing to happen is this gets abandoned. Seen it so many times before that it's getting tedious.
Either update or take down.

So why are The W's unforgivable whores, who deserve to be abused and sworn at by the girl they are being quite nice to, yet Edward is immediately forgivable for doing the same thing?
You're just perpetuating the stereotype here aren't you. Men can be forgiven for behaving like a first class skank, but not women.
Oy Vey! When will us women learn?

Really enjoying it. Can't wait to read more.

Realllllllyyy hope bella doesn't do anything with that sleaze ball mike! Pleasee!

They kissed! Yay lol

Love

Loved it
Keep going
Can't wait to read more

soo is this story going to be one of them that only get the happy ending on the last page and the last line because we have just read 16 chapters of build up and we want to get to the good stuff already

It's a good start after a bad day.
It looks like their friends are all pulling for them to get together.
jansails/jan2

It's always like this. Edward had sex before many times, but Bella is a virgin who waits for him pure and celibate...
I will tell you something. Believe or nor. I would rather go and find one night stand to lose my virginity than to give it to a guy who screw other girls when I was around him, who didin't see me, who didin't care for me to love me enough to want me and only me. If she gives herself to him, after he ignorede her and fucked other girls then she is ridiculous and has no pride.
Now we should believe Edward sudenly loves Bella? After he already got his experiance with other girls? After he already had fun with other girls? Sure, now he can concentrate on Bella, especially when orther boys are interested in her.
He is a hypocrite and he is pathetic. I swear I don't know why people loves heros like him. What is so appealing? Because being atractive nad being popular isn't what really appeal to me. Am I so different from other chicks? I don't thinks so. Of course there are girls who would go for a popular jick, but most of us want someone worthy, someone honorable, smart, kind and with principles. Someone who will care for us and respect us.
So... screw this Edward. I hope Bella will find someone better to give her virginity. Maybe later she can end with Edward, after he will realise how big asshole he was and how Bella should be his first and only.
Good luck with this story.

It's still a double standard though and your writing is super cliche. Come on, make it more interesting! And update more often if you want us to understand the story more fluidly. UGGH.

I think you are on the right track if you can update more. It is hard when a story started so long. I understand taking breaks but that also makes it hard to follow a story that far out too. Please don't take this as I want you to quit just a suggestion on how to keep viewers.

This is like every other immature story on this site. It's boring and everyone can see where it's going a mile off.
Mike will attempt to rape her, or similar, and Edward will charge in on his white horse and save her from a fate worse than death and get the virgin.
What century are you from? How about a little originality? How about not rewarding Edward for being a whore? How about not sending out the message that guys can fuck around as much as they like, but girls must stay pure to 'get the guy' even if he isn't worth having?