What a cute ending!

Haha good job! That was fun! :)

-Yvonne

Amazing. Simply amazing. :D

This was really great. Seriously this paring needs more only problem was that around the third part of the story you suddenly went from present to past tense, but it's no bigie.

PLEASE write more, my gawd that was one beautiful steamy story right thar. Major nosebleed warning...write another? :D

:33333333

I can't even begin to tell you how awesome the lemon was~! 3 *happy-fangirl* Everything went so smoothly and everything! Wonderfully written, once again! 3

~Phantom

AAAAHHHHHHHH.

JUST-

AHHHHH!

I CAN'T EVEN...

ahhhajfsdkls.

that was so good.

like, SO. GOOD.

i can't even... think straight.

ahhhh...

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As far as coherency goes, you've stolen all of mine and I don't care in the least~.

There really isn't enough Lusopp, and certainly not enough smut. Not as well written as this.

Sorry I can't give any decent feedback, but I will say this is wonderfully in-character and that's extremely important to me. It's so difficult to find good fic these days.

I hope you write more Lusopp in the future!

This is cuute~. ;)

Love it. I used to hate ANYONE paired with Usopp, but I'm beginning to be more fond of him. Keep up the incredible work (:

I like this.

You're so right. There isn't enough LuSopp loving. But thanks to you I was able to satisfy my LuSopp fangirl craving .

I have to say, this was beautifully written, the way you keep the two of them in-character is incredible, and combining that with the smut... *fans herself*

How about you write 'the next time' Usopp was thinking about at the

end, that'd be awesome :D