the story took a turn I didn't expect. the writing is good. I like how you add these little battles with shippo and his fox magic to the story. almost kinda feels like I could be watching an anime.

This was a really cute one! I loved Jarius so much, I almost wanted him to get the girl! In a way...I guess he kinda did! ;-)

I don't usually review a lot of fanfictions, but I really felt the need to say how amazing this was.
The plot was new and interesting.
Usually I hate when writers add different beings in fanfictions, because they usually lose the authenticity, but adding Jarius was such a good thing! I was screaming that he left without ever returning. Also how Inukumi's first distaste in Rin was much appreciated, because it would probably be how she would react at first. Then how Korail (totally forgot how to spell her name) wasn't some huge demon slut, and the chemistry that grew with the general was soooo cute!
Also how you mixed the future with the past was a new, refreshing plus!
This fanfictions definitely tops many I have recently read.
Props for the amazing story, and thank you for the change in the usual plot.

Thank you, I enjoyed it.

And Sesshomaru watching them. Hahahaha.

What an awful tragedy for Rin.

Sesshomaru won't be happy.

What?

Can't wait till they meet again..

The hard part is that I don't hate Korial, but Shesshomaru must be with Rin...

There we go now. Hahahahaha

Why must there always be someone to screw their relationship?

She must be with Sesshomaru for ever.

Darn, I didn't want the, to separate.

It was bind to happen, right? Rin is so cute..