Hi, this story is great and really deserves to be expanded & fleshed out . I really enjoyed it and think it could make a great longer story . Thanks for your writing .

Why is she Barren?

Harry and Ron raped her? Wow

hey there this is really good but maybe a sequel? where hermione does medical tests to prove she was aped and revenge? I love revenge stories... anyways I hope you check your fan fiction account soon! love your fanfics!

Good but need more it seems unfinished. I hope I didn't offend you that just the way I fell.

This is a great story you need to finish it. i despise cliffhangers

Its ok but I think you should add to it...

It's a bit hard to take. All I can think about is the changes that Ron and Harry would have to had gone through. So, if they changed, why didn't she?

this is good!

I think it would be more amazing, if they jumped together. Like seeking new way in afterlife :-)

poop

Hmm. I'm speechless ... It was not what I had in mind.
Kisses.
Josi.

hmmm... It had good feeling in it. and it was well written but it had no background to it... and they were OOC.

Nice! VERY nice! I loved it. Short and to the point. Great job.

Much too short LOL I want to hear more!