So sweet!
Very well done too! :)

I loved this! I've read some smellershot fics but this one is the best so far! You should keep writing! It's really good!

I loved this! I've read some smellershot fics but this one is the best so far! You should keep writing! It's really good!

Please continue this! It would make a great full story.

AHHH 3 love it :]

This is a really well-written story. I love how Smellerbee maintained her rebelliousness all through being raised in "A life of Nobility". I also like that you included Toph in here. She's definately one of my favorite Avatar characters. I think, if you decided to, you could continue this. It's really good, and has the potential to be really ah-mazing :) Good story, and happy writing :)

~Coco-kinz11

LUV IT. ITZ SOOO CUTE! PLZ WRITE SUM MORE :-D

That was an awesome first chapter. The writing was great and I just love longshot and smellerbee stories!

Luv it!

wow i was surprised that Toph was travailing with them,

yes Smellerbee found Longshot!

hope you plane on continuing the story.