Yet another example of why most people don't want to read stories with OC's in them. They are forcibly put into the story that have no business being in and take it over as main characters.

FYI, your OC's are not likable at all and is the reason why this story only has such limited reviews after over a year. When compared to other Naruto & Hinata stories with a similar plot, but no OC's. The name eludes me, but it was a decent story with no annoying OC's.

love this fic. it has the most unique plot i hav read since loooooooong time ago

Awesome chapter! It made me cry. Can't wait to read the sequel! This just got me so thrilled to read the sequel. Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon!

Awesome ending! The confession between Naruto and Hinata were really romantic. And the rest of the story, pure awesomeness. Anyways, keep up the good work and I hope the sequel would be updated soon with more NaruHina.

Awesome chapter! It was true, it made me tear up. Anyways, KEEP UPDATING!

Awesome chapter! Naruto surely did a good job for the speech he gave to Hiashi, but sadly it didn't work. While Hiashi's reason for him to hata Hinata seems touhig at the sametime mean. Anyways, KEEP UPDATING and if you have any Facebook account, can you please add Kibble Kin Slider, which is my screen name.

Aw, thanks for the acknowledgement. So Kabuto and Orochimaru. This just gets better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter. Just a bit more and then Naruto and Hinata can finally be together! :)

Nice chapter!

Okay, wow. I did not see that coming. Kuro is an experiment? That's crazy! There are so many loose ends in this story. First, Sasuke still doesn't remember Kuro. Which is all fine and dandy I guess, since it is Sasuke, but maybe a little background history could help.

The second, Sakura and Sasuke's relationship. IT seems to be nonexistant even though we know that Kuro got them together.

Third, is the biggest of them all. What the Inuzukas and Hiashi are doing. That has to end before Hinata and Naruto can get together or it'll just create more conflict. So Shikamaru, Shino, and Gaara's families are going to get involved. This calls for major duty action. And Hiashi may, possibly have to die because he's the main obstacle.

This is great! I can't wait until you update. Hopefully I gave you some ideas. Maybe Kiba will help them out after he finds out what's really going on. And give some clues on who the mastermind is.

What happened to this being a Naruto and Hinata story? We've been way off in left field for awhile now and it has zero to with the either of them.

Whoa crazy. LOL! I love that Gaara's dad is a mobster. That's awesome! Please update. I can' believe what Hinata's dad is doing. It's so wrong. Poor Hinata. She's just being used. And Kiba's family is in on it. (*Note: I'm pretty sure their last name is spelled- Inuzuka) I can't wait for some fights. This is going to be all studded rings, aluminum bats, and the works. Wicked sweet.

And no worries about flames on my part. You have the most BA OC ever!

I like your taste in High School stories. Anyways, nice story and KEEP UPDATING!

Okay, things have just gotten more complicated. This is really good though. I love that Kuro is such an amazing friend. LOL! The mysterious Gaara. LOve him! He's like the role model for changing yourself in the Naruto series. Oh, Hinata and Naruto are going to have another date! Yay! Uh, what is Kiba planning? And poor Neji. If only he could do something. Wait, did you say that Kiba is slowly getting obsessed? Uh, creeper and stalker! THis is bad. This is really bad. Please update soon. I can't wait. I have a feeling who the guys are, but I don't want to jump to conclusions. So can't wait!

"OC" is a choice in the character list for a reason.

Use it and stop clogging up the "NARUTO U." list with this crap.

You say you don't want flames? Then list the story as what it is and the people flaming it will never see it.

Oh, that's so sad. The day was nice, but poor Hinata. If only Naruto hadn't interupted her. But then, she wouldn't have said anything. This is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter. Kuro is such an awesome guy. Oh, I don't want to know what Kiba is planning. And how is Neji letting him get away with it! Really! Oh, I'm so anxious now!