Reviews for The White Fire Prince |
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Danirodriguez1995 chapter 5 . 7/13 Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched. |
justlovereadin chapter 2 . 6/5 I just wanna point out that the outfit Aang wore was the school outfit for a commoner. Probably not what a prince should be wearing in the palace |
koseta.a chapter 2 . 6/1 Your writing is very rigid it feels like an essay. |
dragondoradoga chapter 5 . 4/29 I am fascinated by this story, hopefully they will release the new saga, thank you |
luke.lindenfelser1 chapter 5 . 3/24 Great story i just hope it is not dead. |
eliseew.aleksandr chapter 5 . 12/6/2019 Хотелось бы почитать продолжения |
Zirxces chapter 1 . 10/23/2019 Quick warning for any who look. The first chapter is not an indication as to how good this story is. It seems that the first chapter, in all of its Glory, was written by another person. Afterwards, the story was adopted and the grammar went downhill. Take a look at chapter two before you decide to get too attached to the story. Smh, after I thought I had finally found a good read, it was ruined. |
Zirxces chapter 1 . 10/23/2019 Quick warning for any who look. The first chapter is not an indication as to how good this story is. It seems that the first chapter, in all of its Glory, was written by another person. Afterwards, the story was adopted and the grammar went downhill. Take a look at chapter two before you decide to get too attached to the story. Smh, after I thought I had finally found a good read, it was ruined. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/11/2019 Chakra based fire isnt weaker. Thats like saying chakra based water is weaker than natural water. |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/30/2019 I hope you make more chapters. |
jensen6 chapter 5 . 2/15/2019 Where has this story gone too. I understand if your not writing anymore but you could at least let everyone know. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2018 Oh man. Bad grammar and punctuation alert. This dude loves putting the word 'as' in every sentence. Ugh. |
kizoku.ouninaru chapter 5 . 10/1/2018 YOOOOO THIS NEEDS MORE CHAPPIES MAN! im friggin hooked! this is by far one of the BEST naruto/avatar cross overs ive ever read EVER |
reaperofages chapter 5 . 9/23/2018 good story hope that you may update this would like to read more of it |
Jajur von Hohenzollern chapter 5 . 9/18/2018 And another story full of potential ends too early |