Parker is a straight shooter and very private, her covering for Eliot after being stalked is reasonable, but not practical. She's not afraid of anyone, and she would have let Eliot have it (tongue lashing). Eliots revelation would have calmed her down, but she would have told Alec. I like the note being left, but I can't envision Parker responding that way.

Oh my GOSH this is so cute! So so adorable. And it's really clever. :) I especially loved the ending! Great characterization. Amazing writing.

AWWWW!

nice .:)

God this is just too perfect.

I really liked your story, well done :)

AWW! This fic made me want to squee. I honestly loved it. From the "The children are fighting again" moments with Nate and Sophie to Eliot's confession was so sweet. Nice characterization of Parker. The woman's nuts, but she's the kind of nuts that takes care of her own. All around good job!

That was cute. I like the way they try to protect each other.

You know, I cringe everytime I read Parker/Eliot fics around. And there are some pretty good ones, where the con is well thought and everything, and then suddenly Parker and Eliot are making out and it's ruined.

I can't see them as nothing but siblings. I mean, seriously, they are fighting most of the time, and Eliot makes sure Parker knows when he's mad at her, or perturbed by her... quirks. 'There's somethin wrong with you, Parker' is what he says most of the time, and the facial expressions exchanged between them are just amazing. But every time she needs him, he's there, and she's always around him, in briefings and stuff. Basically, how every big brother/little sister I've met behave around each other.

And I love to read this here! Thanks for the fic ))

Poor Eliot! It was cute that Parker kept his secret, and gave him a ticket, and permission. She's so understanding even though she is sorta emotionally detached. Great fic!

I love it!

You write Hardison so well, I can literally hear and see him saying all those things as if it were him on the actual show.

And Eliot: "Fear was supposed to fear him." That was perfect, I don't think anyone could sum him up so perfectly as that one sentence.

I love the whole sibling thing too.

This is really sweet, heartwrenching and heartwarming all at once. It was an interesting backstory for Eliot and his need to protect those that he cares about. Good job. :)

The fic was good but my favorite part (other than the pepper spray) was the movie ticket!

This was a great read! I could so see this playing out on the show. Kudos friend, you nailed it.

I love this story. It's so cute how he's protecting them.