SO FREAKING AMAZING YOU ARE PERFFECT YOU WRITING ENTITY

Read the whole thing in one sitting. Top notch stuff, really! Your characterization is spot on, and it's an intriguing story. Of course Sam was the suspicious one, haha! :D Love it.

I assume that 'part 1' means there will be a sequel? Please do, I'll be eagerly awaiting. this was amazing.

this is really awesome! Loves it!

Wow, just... Wow. Amazing characterization, Michael's narration was spot-on, all around just awesome. Can't wait to read Part 2.

Hi just read your story it was very good.

Excellent:)

This is the second time I've read this, and I'm just as impressed as the first time. You have developed a wonderful story and have captured the Doctor post-Doomsday very well. Even more, you have captured the feel and the entire cast of Burn Notice brilliantly. I have favorited this and mentioned it to a few friends, and I also intend to include it on my next fic-rec list that includes crossovers. I am disappointed there isn't a sequel; I know it would be brilliant!

I love burn notice and doctor who! You aced this fic in my book! Make a sequel! :D

I love this story!

I just found this story yesterday, and I've really enjoyed reading it. It sounds as if there's meant to be a sequel, but I wonder if you plan on doing that since it's been a couple of years.

In any case, I really loved what you did bringing the Doctor into Michael's life. I really wasn't sure a crossover of these two shows would make sense, but you blended them together very well, keeping everyone in character while at the same time giving them an awesome adventure together.

I loved that you made Seymour and alien. That makes so much sense, I will never see him the same way again.

I thought the way Fiona seemed more likely to believe the Doctor while Sam was more skeptical made a lot of sense too. Michael was more in between at the beginning, but it seemed like his connection to the Doctor got stronger as the story went on. For that reason, I think it would be great if you ever did a sequel.

One last thing, I loved the way you did the "Michael Narration." I think it adds a humorous tone to the show and your story, and you used it very effectively.

Thanks for a great read!

On your homepage, you said this is set before the last scene of Doomsday. But when you watch that episode it's pretty clear nothing else has happened. A Doctor Who fanfic set during a television story, which doesn't contradict it?

This story was just brilliant! I loved it! The entire thing flowed together so nicely with all of the interjections, the pacing, and the writing style itself. I also adored the way you didn't just have everyone immediately accept the whole 'aliens are real' thing and even had Sam be a bit xenophobic. Everyone was in character, and that isn't something you see a lot when you read fan fiction. I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep up the great writing!

Please, please tell me you are going to write and publish the sequel to this. I absolutely loved it, and now I'm incredibly keen to see the next instalment. Though the last update date was a while ago. Still I can hope yes?

Nice..I am planning on writing a Burn Notice Doctor who cross over,thought I would be the only one..You did a good job so far..Hope to read more soon..