I know I'm very late to read this but since I have free time during Covid situation, I re-read bleach and once again obsessed about this couple.

I love the setting and the storyline that this fiction could lead to. I like that you still portrayed the characters quite similar to the original. But the thing is the way Orihime is a dreamy girl makes it difficult to write since her mind wanders a lot and sometimes makes me confused as well. haha. But I do like this personality of her, just cut it out a bit would be nice.

Last thing, try not to use () and - too much in the writing. My feeling dropped a bit since that makes the writing not smooth as it could have been. All the rest is just perfect. It is my fav AU so far :)

AW DAMN this was good! please update!

Please update! this fic is so good

more, more, more ')

I love it so much! It is one of the best I've ever read

The dead cat description, fucking descriptive. First chapter and Loving it!

Oh my God this is freaking fantastic! I hope you still plan on updating this story, I'm hooked! I have not found another Ulquihime story that takes this point of view and even in the moments where i get confused as to what setting we are in or what the characters are doing, you still bring it all together in just a few words. I also really like the way you've made Orihime captive; instead of taking her to Hueco Mundo she's allowed herself to be a prisoner in her own world, by her own words, by her own choice. And that's what started their relationship in the anime/manga- he gave her a choice, made her make the decision to leave her friends, to serve Aizen. Granted it was manipulated all along, just as it is in your tale. But I'm loving these characterizations. I hope we see some Grimmjow soon!

Ohmagawd. Yay, according to your profile, you're back! My stalker ass knows this because I was just about to re read this fan fic for some inspiration, since I'm writing my little stories again. Wow, you honestly have some amazing talent and I pray that you can update soon!

- Stella Chanellé

I really enjoyed your fic. It has the perfect amount of darkness to it. It's very beautifully worded and you paint brilliant images. I can't wait to see what you have in plan for the rest of this fic. I'm hoping for some sort of happily ever after!

Cheers,
b.a.

Where arę you! I need more! I'm so in love with youre writing style. And now i'm going to die from anticipation what wilk happend next! :(

Wow! I love your style of writing, you're amazing and I can't wait to read the next chapter (:

Why are you so obsessed with rape

I am still confused with the plot.

What a delicious chapter! ;) i can't wait for what's to come! My guess is that Tatsuki will get her memory wiped, and Orihime will be left to face the guilt of her friend finding out and then having her memory erased altogether. But she won't be able to do a thing about it because exposing her secret will mean exposing Ulquiorra and the rest of the Arrancar. What a way to make her choose between the (and her) "two sides"!

You are a brilliant author! Can't wait to read the rest! :)

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