No Apollo! You aren’t the monster! Ares is!

Awesome story. I love Artemis and Apollo, although I thought that Artemis had died. I was slightly confused at the end when Artemis went behind Apollo who punched her in the face. Other than that, it was a great story.

this is good :) i like this a lot! please update or write a sequel!

very,very interesting cant wait for the updates but if you're doing a flashback you should put in italics it makes it easier for the reader.

The secret side of me, I never let you see

I keep it caged but I can't control it

So stay away from me, the beast is ugly

I feel the rage and I just can't hold it

It's scratching on the walls, in the closet, in the halls

It comes awake and I can't control it

Hiding under the bed, in my body, in my head

Why won't somebody come and save me from this, make it end?

I feel it deep within, it's just beneath the skin

I must confess that I feel like a monster

I hate what I've become, the nightmare's just begun

I must confess that I feel like a monster

Skillet Pwns.

Love the Emoness. Hate Ares. Seeing Apollo depressed gives me a funny feeling.