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Summer Luna Skye chapter 3 . 5/26
Hmm...It's hard for me to create a story idea immediately or on the spot, but maybe you can say that the snake-like things will try to persuade Thalia into letting them rule, and then she goes missing into somewhere, maybe in a secret hideout behind the Niagara Falls, and Percy, Nico, and Annabeth have to go save her. Then, along the way, Percy and Annabeth make up. Nico was assaulted by many girls along the way. Then, he finally finds Thalia, only to see her lying down, Ichor flowing out. Then, he, Annabeth, and Percy tries to save Thalia and they found the Gods there (every other than Artemis). Then, they have to help the Gods escape and the Gods take the Reign again while Clarisse, Annabeth, Percy, Nico, Katie, Travis, and Connor have to track down the snake things and kill them, while they have to free Artemis. Then, you can consider adding the part that Artemis thanks Thalia and wants her to join the hunt. Nico is anxious. But then Thaliacomes out of Artemis's tent sadly. And Nico is worried but she tricks him and she is actually staying with him. They then return to camp only to see Nico being ambushed by girls. Nico tries to get away from the girls announcing that he and Thalia were dating and he knows how much Thalia is hurt(from the past). Then a girl(Aphrodite's most likely) kisses Nico (yes it will be cliche) and Thalia will see and ya know, breakups and things like that. Then Thalia will let her inner-self out and when boys flirt, she will just smile at them. Then, Nico HAS to get with the Aphrodite girl. Also, when boys want to hug her, she will hug them. But not kiss them. Then, Nico will get hella jealous and break off with his girlfriend, and protect Thalia from all others. Then, finally they will get together. Hoped you got inspiration.
estutmirleid chapter 3 . 6/19/2016
Oh the agony you have put your readers through! : . . . . . Maybe you could write in each god/gpddesses POV for each chapter and then finally reveal who the snake ppl are. Then you could write anout the New Gods saving the old ones.
The wise girl chapter 3 . 6/27/2015
I forgot to say my name on the post is Elsa the queen of ice if you do use my ideas pls use that name :)
The wise girl chapter 3 . 6/27/2015
Ok so what you do is start having the snakes talk to Travis and have annabeth and Percy do world war 3 Travis will start trying to kill the other god/dess then you have the real gods start to realize where there at and when they get out have Gaia do a spell or something and they have amnisha then you have god picking sides with percy and annabeth Travis try's to kill Thalia and Nico saves her so then every one finds out about them being together and then annabeth and Percy stop world war 3 because they start to remember why they love each other and the real gods start to remember who they are because they get mad at thalico and Athena and posiden take longer to remember until there children start to help meaning annabeth Malcolm and Percy oh if you can I would love it if you could make me a character I would love to be a daughter of Athena and date will apollos son my name is Isabelle I love this story it would mean so much if you did my idea but I won't hate you if you don't :)
Booklover3000 chapter 3 . 10/31/2014
okay so I normally don't do this but here's an Idea

To keep percabeth going i suggest you make Thalia and nico force them on a date
Xx18TheOneWhoWasBoth61xX chapter 3 . 8/7/2014
How bout Thalico take a down fall, breaking up, Percabeth split up, but maybe something happens to Thalia and Nico, and Thalia has a baby. The baby could be some weird evil hybrid thingy, and be easily possessed by whatever those snake things are. Some shiz could go down, and then add little Tratie here and there, and you have a perfect recipe for the perfect fanfic. Remember, this is a fanfiction, no need to think, just write!

(Maybe Nico could get that trait of 'I think I may steal a girl, and make her my wife' kinda trait from his father. If you get that.)

If u want any ideas, PM me. I love helping out people, I don't have enough time to write my own fanfic, I deleted them all, so ask away!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
have it so the new gods deafeat the evil, percabeth and thalico hapens, and when the evil is defeated, the gods reaprear
Guest chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
Please don't end this story. You are such a great writer I just know that you'll think of something eventually as long as you just try and think about it.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/13/2014
Good story
Maybe u could put some action in it like war...
Natilie chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
Ok, you should make Percy and Annabeth get back together after realizing that what Thalia said is true and the gods fight there way out of their prison/dungeon thing and then there is a war, the original gods win and Conner is the only one who dies. I MADE THIS UP ON THE SPOT SO AT LEAST USE ONE OR TWO IDEAS. BUT PERCABETH MUST RETURN!
nico di angelo's brother chapter 3 . 11/17/2013
why not just make it like what Thalia and Nico did in the times they were gods and put romance
Look For The Silver Lining chapter 3 . 8/14/2013
NOO! CRAP. I don't have any ideas.
Look For The Silver Lining chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Maybe can't live without it. Because this was an awesome story!
Percabeth-Fan-02 chapter 3 . 8/7/2013
something happens in the underworld and nico needs Thaila to help him and they fall deeper in love?
Lilycooper23 chapter 3 . 7/26/2013
Update please?!:)
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