hey make more alreasy

Update please!

Update soon

Nice job there. I like this story. Hope you update soon

The supreme(what a short review... eh idc)

omg this is going to be good

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Y...

You have done an awesome job... o.O

I guess your knowledge of animes was enough, seeing as the content of this chapter is good! :D

I really like the dialogue here, how Naruto insisted on him being fine, then Kiba's concern for his best friend, etc.

But I think you missed the girls, did you not write them on purpose...?

I also like the humor you put into this.

"Something smells fishy…"

"Oh, maybe it's because of this tuna sandwich…"

"I guess you're right. Thanks pal. I owe you…"

"Oh, so since you owe me, I don't have to treat you to Ichiraku, huh?"

"That's a different matter!"

XD Awesome! XD

*I have no experience in these kinds of things*

Pshaw, no experience my foot. ;)

Anyways, this chapter is GREAT! (As Johnny and Kawamura-senpai would say, XD )

Please keep going.

So...I dunno what to write here anymore, since I've already told you at fb, xD

Anyways, like I said there, this chapter is like a filler, but it's good nontheless. I also liked the cliffhanger you put there, it's so literary! XD

I found the part where Naruto was called a creep funny, XD

Typical Hinata, she always knows when Naruto is down... :)

I await more of the NaruHina fluffiness! XD (lol, I know something's wrong with that last sentence but meh, XD)

Awesome chapter! The longer the story the better! I wonder why happens next. I hope he would give up Sakura already... Update soon!

It's incredible...

I'd say this chapter was worth the wait and more. You're writing has improved incredibly; Just to how it was on the first chapters. You just confuses some tenses a bit, but besides that it's stupendous.

I'm not a big fan of charcter POV's, kinda ruins it for me.

Please keep going.

I'm glad you updated! I really do love it!

Nice chapter. I'm glad Naruto finally knows how Sakura feels about him; it means we're getting closer to NaruHina...

I don't think it was too early on in the story _ Something like this helps the story to progress so it was placed perfectly.

For character POVs, why not write a chapter with some in and see if it works out. It would be awesome to do something in Hinata's POV as then we could see her feelings about the two guys!

Anyways, great job! Hope you can update soon!

Poor Naruto. Keep going.

It was a great chapter, but one thing. Why havent you updated? You were on a roll last time and now you stopped... What happened with you? Anyways... update soon as usual, thank you.

Good chapter! You have the gift of unpredictability :)

One thing though. You transition between present tense and past tense too much. This is what I mean.

He sighs-Present tense

He sighed-Past tense.

Both are perfectly well to use in your story, but you should choose one and stick to it. Using both makes your story look somewhat sloppy.

Besides that, I loved this chapter :)