Wow I honestly wish you would continue it is so good

The fact he does not leave with Sasuke's money to become a waiter annoys me. Like it's completely illogical.

That was beautiful yet so very sad though the fact that Sasuke and him grew to have a friendship made me smile

I've cried

Why not leave with Sasuke's money the first time he offered? I'm sure it be better for both. He feels bad but Sasuke gains to from it and no longer has to share.

ohmy, i cried , it's heartbreakingly beautiful

Nice fic.

I like your story.
No, I love your story. This is the best story I've ever read. Not so far, not one of the best, but my.. all time story. The story that I want to keep it to myself, the first story makes me don't want to share and talk about how good it is.
It's a strange feeling actually. I don't know how to react, I don't know if I can read any fanfictions, any stories more and not compare them to this one, feel like they are not good enough.
I was about to cry a bit when Naruto said he had the urge to cry. But luckily I stopped myself on time before it was too late, ha ha.
The way you describe Sasuke, and Naruto, it seems so prefect to me. The way Naruto thought, the way Sasuke act... just fit in so so well.
And the ending. Oh my, you don't know how much I hate open ending, I actually had felt rage when I read the ending, but then I calmed myself and realize how good it was.
Naruto wouldn't depend on Sasuke, he had hope in such dirty place, and he worked hard, he waited for a better future, with him standing by Sasuke by his own.
That's mine verison of ending, so beaitiful. And... Sasuke willing to wait for him.
I want to translate your story so bad, then keep it for my own. Someday, when I find the right person... I'm gonna share it. Selfish little, ha ha.
Thank you so so much for writing this fanfic, and share it, make me feel really happy.
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
and please forgive my terrible english, and my rambling.
i just really LOVE this.

Wow. Outstanding work here. I wanna read all your stories.

Oh wow, that story waas amazing.

I cried.

I really like the way you wrote this. I don't read Lemon SasuNaru like, ever, but I was looking up story ideas on prostitution and so I gave this one a go. I might make a story of my own myself on the same theme so I read this as an example. I like it! I like how in-character your wrote the characters, especially Sasuke, and I like how this story was done in parts/sections. I also like how your take gave more of a realistic light on prostitution compared to others that may have glamorized the occupation. Prostitution is certainly far from glamorous.
Anyway, very nicely done. Normally I wouldn't but I think I'll place this story on my list of Favorite Stories, if every I want to come back to it.

P.S. The second-to-last paragraph of this one-shot has a minor mistake. There is a sentence that just cuts off and is never finished. Just thought I'd point that out if you care to ever go back and complete it.

I reaaaally like this. But I was disappointed at the end when Sasuke didn't whisk Naruto away in his arms.

Oh well. Good story. :)

-Native

I fell in love with this story. I like your style and how you can make a whole story out of few fragments. I don't know what to say anymore, I wish it had more story, but I loved how you ended with hope and not actually a happy ending. :)

From the beginning, you totally had me sucked in. I love your style of writing, and this story was fantastic. I normally don't review, but I loved this so much, I feel that I have to (:

The story was very easy to read and understand. I enjoyed the plot and found the story addicting! My mother kept telling me to get off the computer, but I had to finish this story first. I loved it, and your hard work is appreciated! I will now sub to you, keep up the great work!