Before I start reading, please do tell me the following.

How old are the characters?

How so is Nico involved in this story?

If they are really young, will they get older?

This was a great story to read. I really enjoyed the beginning/middle. The end was a bit too much like twilight, which I don't really enjoy. but your talented writing made up for it. Keep up the great work!

'Argus was speechless' hahaha.

Hey, before i start I just wan't you to know that you're story is the only PJO story I read, and I check,like, every day to see if you have updated it, ok now that that is over with, I think this chapter was amazing, and for the other chapter my friend and I keep telling each other those greek myth pick up lines, it's hilarious, people stare, so I like the mix you did of drama and comedy in it and I'm really glad you remembered the fact that empousa don't have blood, but sand, so yay, but whenever an empousa gets cut, they always go to Tarturus because the sand doesn't stop coming so, technicly (sp?), Nico shouldn't even be alive, but besides that your storys really good, keep up the good work, and update a.s.a.p. please

XsilverbloodX

awesome! laina isn't dead!

"Are you a child of Aeolus? 'Cause you blew me away!"

LOL! So cute so funny! Please update!

Can you update soon i can't wait to think of what'll happen between nico and laina :D

poor thirteen-year old male emposia nico, i really feel sorry for him.

awesomeness!

wow

nooooooooooooo!

great story

update soon

You are an amazing writer, and your story is super creative. Is the main character actually from Greek Mythology? or did you make it up? Either way I love your story, so keep updating! Is Russel the one who stole Zeus' blood, and that's why he appears as a son of Zeus? That's what I think...

Will there be a Sequel to this? Because I think that would be awesome.

SIG but its not story is good its story is great and funny. i am still laughing at the justing beiber joke, there really is nothing worse, NOTHING! anyway, i love your story and it so origanal and i like how the books actually exist in the story so great fantabulasticly amazing job and remember,

READ, WRITE, LOVE FANFICTION

~DL

Love the story it's amazing update very spoon

Story's awesome update soon

Theres one thing still bugging me...i want to find out about that little man who drank zeus's blood. Its gotta be important. Maybe Russel is connected to it. I dont know, but your story is seriously make my brain work overtime D

I love your story too...oh, and also whats gonna happen when zues gives his blessing? Because it cant work the same...i dont think. Arghhh! So confusing ;) You have gotta update man, im seriously loving this story.