Reviews for Passing Time |
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Claudia Ferguson chapter 3 . 6/8/2018 Omg please please write more because I love it so much! |
MissusNellieTodd chapter 3 . 2/11/2017 PLEASE UPDATE THISSSSSS |
bellovettrix chapter 3 . 11/9/2014 I still love reading this...for nth time. Toby is so adorable. XD |
Caitlyn chapter 3 . 8/25/2013 EEEEEEEEEE this was very cute! :D I DO prefer the original version, but this was an interesting twist and very cute because Toby is very cute hehehe |
CAitlyn chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 DIDN'T THINK HE HAD IT IN HIM? DID YOU FORGET HE SLIT YOUR THROAT SWEEENEY? this is gr8 rly gr8 |
guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2013 Just stumbled onto yur story plz update i love it. |
Inkfire chapter 3 . 12/31/2012 Always lovely to see something you've written! ;) I really liked the circumstances that led to Sweenett happening her, and Eleanor's frantic nervousness was very nicely depicted. Her reuniting with Toby was just adorable, she was all over the place with affection, it was so sweet! The bond between them was shown very strongly and that was just lovely. Eleanor's ''life lessons'' were brilliant ;) I loved the way Eleanor tried to smoke the anxiety away and Toby picked up on that immediately. Her fears of being a bad mother were nicely shown too, and I loved Toby's reaction to the news. Controlled, but fearsome P ''I'm almost two hundred years old – if I was with anyone else but 'im it'd be pedophilia!'' I simply died laughing at that line, LOL. And the stereo – so TEENAGE! ;) Sweeney's attitude was just wonderfully fitting, and I loved the argument between him and Eleanor. ''Toby's room looks as if a very old man and a twelve-year-old child are cohabitating, which in a way, Sweeney supposes they are.'' Wonderful insight there again, I thought the whole description was lovely! Love the way Sweeney got Toby's attention, I loved the whole argument, the smug part about having ''shacked up'' already, and the memories of Eleanor's sulking ;) It was all wonderfully handled, and I LOVED it when Toby got all badass and protective in the end. It was an incredible moment! And Sweeney's reaction to it was just perfect too, the reluctant respect, and the way it slowly led him to consider his own feelings – and he just stopped right there, lol. The ending was ADORABLE, I simply swooned. You are brilliance ) |
dionne dance chapter 3 . 12/31/2012 Thank you for sharing this chapter! What a wonderful gift to all of us. I've enjoyed all of your Passing Strange universes and chapters, and will read any and all you post with joy! Thanks! |
Thalia-Sandy chapter 3 . 12/31/2012 You can't imagine how happy you made me by updating this! To be honest I had pretty much given up all hope that you'd ever post another chapter of Passing Time...But I'm SO glad you did! I absolutely LOVED this chapter! Especially that part made me laugh: [Internally wincing a bit and wondering what the neighbors must think about that rather loud accusation, Sweeney snaps, "Already have, actually." Toby makes a noise somewhere between a horrified squeak and a groan of mortification. Sweeney tries not to feel too smug. "Why would you say that?" He shouts. "God, do you think I want images like that in my 'ead?!"] OMG! I totally did not expect him to say that! Sweeney Todd telling it like it is XD And Toby's reaction makes it even more hilarious! I really hope you're going to update again eventually because not just Passing Strange/Passing Time but all your stories make me ridiculously happy! |
HellieLovett chapter 3 . 12/31/2012 Ohhhhh my dear goodness you updated! AHH! You have no idea how hard I was spazzing! I love love love love this. Poor Toby. Scratch, I love all the chapters. I hope you write more! :) |
linalove chapter 3 . 12/31/2012 I am glad you updated...I do hope you update your other ST story (Proof of Heaven)too...Happy New Year.:) |
thelovelyflorencelovett chapter 3 . 12/31/2012 Your writing is exceptional ! I love this story :) I'd love it if you continue, happy new year :) |
RomanticTimeTraveler chapter 3 . 12/30/2012 Oh my gosh! :) welcome! You've finally rejoined the living! This is such a great story so I'm really happy to see you update it. Oh and last summer I got Johanna in a local theater's production of Sweeney Todd. I used a lot of what you wrote to help me with screen study. I had the time of my life AND I OWE IT ALLLLLL TO YOU! Happy New Year! Xoxoxo RTT |
EleKat chapter 3 . 12/30/2012 Really good! Please update soon! |
mischieflover chapter 3 . 12/30/2012 Well hello there! I'd forgotten all about this! But in a way it's like there was hardly a break! It's such a unique and lovely story that I could remember much of what had been going on :) I think as long as I know that there will be more updates, I'm okay with an undetermined amount of time to wait. Fantastic update, as usual! I'll be happily awaiting the next one! ml |