Reviews for Expecting |
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![]() ![]() Oh this is cute! I wish you'd continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG.. Can you go on with this? PLEASE?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this about 10 times. I still love it |
![]() ![]() :) |
![]() ![]() YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE |
![]() ![]() MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! |
![]() ![]() Beautiful, this made me cry! Absolute perfection! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start to the story. Update please. |
![]() ![]() awwwww, so cute love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should definatly make a sequel! :) But the sequel should be longer too, so Rose could actually show and give birth. :) But that's just me. |
![]() ![]() Love love love! This is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad someone FINALY gave them a happy ending. :) |
![]() ![]() It's written pretty well, although I'm not going to lie - I'm slightly disappointed that Rose seems to lose her personality now she's married. It doesn't seem right that The Doctor wouldn't let her out of his sight - even if it's meant to sound protectively sweet, it sounds a bit...controlling. Neither does she seem like the sort of person to start crying so easily. I think she'd be more numb, desperately trying to keep a brave face. And the way she blames herself for being pregnant - it seems to me that the Doctor would be the sort of person who would be careful to use protection, even if Rose didn't, and that he would be more likely to blame himself than she would be. But I'd love to see the sequel, if you intend to write one? |