Man this epilogue had me grinning nonstop. It was so fluffy and cute, it’s been wayy too long since I read a story like this. I’m just so giddy right now. I’m probably going to dive into the others immediately. This was a wonderful little story, great job.

Yeah I’m pretty sure I’m dead right now, I would like Serah to sedate me too. My sister told me about the beta conversation years ago, but hell, actually reading it was another thing. I got to the point where Bart asked her “Are you sleeping with my son?” And then all of reality paused, I realised this was the chapter. Man I wasn’t ready.

Ah, the start it the chapter was so painful to go through. The descriptions of her shock were so uncomfortably visceral.
It was really nice being able to read through the scenes with his father and with Light at the end. They had such a sweet, warm feeling in them.

Haha, my sister warned me about the comments from your beta. This is...exactly what I was looking expecting.
I was worried about Light for a sec there, good to know she’s okay.

I read this story a decade ago and am back in the Hoperai feels after finishing XIII-2 and LR, and it was SO much fun to revisit this! Hope is such a precious bean and the story is so much fun. Love it!

I’m felt so sorry for Lightning when Serah assumes they’d slept together, that’s so awfully embarrassing.
I’m happy they went with Hope’s plan, I understand Light’s angle sure, but I felt it would risk too much. The fair path does seem like the right path.
I’m also glad they made up. It was cute.

Alright, I didn’t expect a kiss so early on. That was cute as hell. I’m dying. Great job, thank you.

When Serah and Hope were hiding things, I didn’t make the connection that Hope had been sick too. I’m concerned and curious about where this is going to lead. I’m happy that the chapter ended happily, the interactions in this chapter were so nice to read. It’s a lot calmer than what I was reading before, makes some nice warm feelings for me.

There was a lot of information this chapter I’m happy. That moment with Hope and Light at the end was so cute, I’m dying for more.

Well that was an ending, I’m interested to see what these natives are going to do.

I’m really hoping this investigation leads to good news, Hope sounds like he needs it.
Not sure how Snow’s truck at the end is going to go, but I’m curious as ever to see.

Ooh lord I do hope Light is okay. I’m a little scared over what Hope and Serah are not telling her.

I hope she’s okay, certainly a panic worthy situation. I’m probably going to get secondhand embarrassment over having to deal with the fact she threw up on him though...

They’re so awkward together. This is just as beautifully painful as I assumed it would be. Man I want to see more, this was so fun to read,

Man my sister’s been telling me to read your stories for years. I stopped reading fanfics awhile back, so I really hope this’ll be a great way to get back into them. She speaks really highly of you, so I guess I’m excited.
The concept seems super interesting at this point too, I’m looking forward to getting through the other chapters.