Poor Leo. It hurts to lose someone you love so much. Was Karai her sister? Leo is so protective of his brothers that I know he would make a great father to his son.

ME dolió el corazón, siempre le tienen que pasar estas cosas a Leo. Dios al menos ya está con su familia.

I learns a little Hebrew back when I was in Israel for sometime, and like the heart is actually 'kmo lev'. Sorry I'm annoying.
Nice job ;)

[sniffles and grins] That was beautiful!

Wicked

This is one of the few Leo centric FF stories I have added to my Favorites. I'm a Mikey girl, but this is so well-written that I love it. Kudos.

Snifff.. Sniiiiiiiff

Aaaaaahhh! So much angst!

I hate seeing Leo looking like this. Huhuhuhu.

Cho died without seeing Caleb grow up. Huhuhuhu...

I love how Mikey and his family are nursing Leo back to health.

Poor Caleb and Cho.

Don is so imoressive. He figured that out just with Leo's reaction with the camera flash.

Interesting.

This is what I'd expect of the turtles; to eventually have real romantic feelings and do something about those feelings. I was sort of disappointed that it wasn't Karai. I was betting on that whole forbidden romance factor, but it did help that it wasn't just some ordinary, unconnected OC Leo went chasing after. Cho Uta is a strange character, having shown up out of nowhere and I was kinda left high and dry about her and Leo's relationship for the most part, which worked in terms of mystery. I really wanted to know. I was fed enough though that I did finally get a connection to Shredder and all that, but I still wanted even more depth to her character outside of the ending. Maybe more flashbacks... She was an interesting OC after all.
I did appreciate Leo's overprotectiveness towards the baby. Since he will have to play the role of both parents, minus all the uncles and one aunt, *cough* April, that the kid will be raised with. I also like the team of doctors you assembled and the idea of preparing them for the turtle's appearance. It only make sense to do that so the whole staff doesn't either freak out or pass out on them first. Loved the beginning of Don's conversation with them and how awkward it was. Nathan was a wonderful intermediate and appreciated his character immensely for enabling things to go smoothly for the resident genius.
But my favorite part was the ending, I didn't expect it and was pleasantly surprised by it. So all this time, Raph's been hiding a few secrets of his own.

i loved this!