Sexy! So sexy!

Hi, I've just seen this story up on DeviantArt. I just wanted to make sure that it is really you because I don't like it when people steal other people's work. If that is you, that's perfectly fine. I just wanted to let you know. :)

Spirk forever

Dom Spock I like...Pon Farr Spock, not so much.

Fuck me clueless...dirty talking Spock has got to be the sexiest thing I've ever read!

Good story, but I have a few corrections for you: it's T'hy'la, even though it sounds like ta'hy'la. And when Vulcans undergo blood fever the only way it is cured is through mating. The fever doesn't 'go down' as you wrote until mating. As far as I'm aware, Spock and Kirk were not bonded until after Pon Farr, which should be after the destruction of Vulcan. Even if they were bonded, Kirk would only die if Spock did, and the only reason Spock could possibly die is if Kirk rejected him or if they didn't have intercourse quickly enough. However, if Spock had the fever, he would stop at nothing to take his mate, so that is also unlikely.
Please forgive my unrelenting OCD.

I LOVE demanding/ruff/master Spock! Job well done

Yay! Love is grand, is it not?

That was AWESOME! It was probably one of the best M rated fanfics I've read! I haven't seen Star Trek before ( go ahead, yell at me), but this totally makes me want to watch it. I wonder what it will be like seeing the strong, silent Spock and thinking of this. I actually found this because I was talking to one of my friends about how some fanfic writers make the characters in the story act out of character. She told me that the Star Trek Pon Farr lets a writer go wild with the situation while (technically) keeping to the person's personality. I got interested so I asked about it more and I looked it up.
Found this. And i am so glad I did. This was brilliantly written and the sxx scene was soooooo delicious.

God damn. DAMN. That was hottttt. You did really well in capturing their personalities too. :)
MORE! lol. :)

Damn. Poor Jim. And poor Spock. Nobody wins in this scenario.

woooOOOOOW that was wow

I loved it

Oh my god, after reading this I feel like I'm going thru Pon Farr myself! Very awesomely done! Continue with your good work!

This is good. I just wish I could remember what fic this is technically a continuation of, where Spock is out of control and Amanda has to whip him back into shape. I know I've read it but I can't find it again. Did you write it? Did AmyCoolz write it? It's not on either of your profiles.