Very nice, I really liked your piece. The only thing I would change is the ending, and only because I love a mind fuck. I wouldn't tell your readers that the bishop only tipped, I'd just have her nudge it and get distracted, leaving your audiance wondering...was she dreaming...?

Other than that one little thing, amazing job! Thank you for sharing.

Yummy! u

Ha! That was incredibly well written and I just loved the ending. I definitely didn't expect this when I clicked on the story.

*Finz*

always like seeing more of all three of them, i really like the matchup. :)

that was hotter then hot

maria

Oh my god, that was hot! Great job. I love your writing style :)

Very hot and smexy! You need to write more threesomes for the trio. I don't blame the girl- I would have a really, really, REALLY hard time trying to choose between the two...

Your lemons are wonderfully zesty~::kisses fingers::

Please write more!

Definitely one of the best Arthur/Ariadne/Eames fics out there! Very nice! ;)

OK ok...im confused does the bishop just tilt?...or does it actually fall? :S *stresss*

i love it btw xD you kept the characters in character which is such a relief! (: xox

Hawt. love it :)

soooo...She's dreaming? THis was an awesome lemon, thanx

This was stunning, not to mention HOT! I always expect Arthur/Ariadne, or even Arthur/Eames...but putting the three of them together is like fireworks! You really did a fantastic job, hope you keep writing!