Reviews for DEMON COUPLE
thegrison chapter 2 . 5/23
ROTFLMAO! There is NO way the third Hokage did NOT know about that. Nice try though but you could have done that a lot better. Her fight against Neji would have activated her tail beasts chakra without her wanted or knowing. The tailed beast force chakra to keep the host alive. So No way it would not show up then. Plus sealing a tail beast into a non Uzumaki would kill them if it is not done within a week of birth. A bigger fact the 5 tail in Iwa and been there for 15 plus years before her birth. Again nice try but FAILED.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/3
It said kumo
lovebishies chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
I read one of youe stories befire about when Naruto was a cop and I loved your writing style so I looked at more of your work and found this. Just recently started reading fanfiction and glad to find good naruhina. Just finished Demon Couple and ready to read the sequel
Zero Arashi Uchiha chapter 4 . 2/2/2016
magnificent
Zero Arashi Uchiha chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
Very interesting I love how you written the story
joe chapter 18 . 7/23/2015
great story and AU means Alternate Universe
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
nice
H chapter 18 . 6/5/2015
AU means Alternate Universe
H chapter 12 . 6/5/2015
You spelled Jiraiya's name wrong
Guest chapter 23 . 12/12/2014
THIS STORY WAS FREAKING AMAZING! oh my god author-san, Bravo! _ best naruto fanfic ive ever read, loved tough hinata and corny naruto and what was that sasuke? signs of emotion? theres actually a heart under that stone cold chest?
THANKS AUTHOR! :D
Pay Attention chapter 10 . 8/4/2014
Response 4 chap. 10: why don't u just search it up on google translate?
WRITE MOOOOOOREE chapter 22 . 8/3/2014
WRITE MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEE
SHAYLEE chapter 19 . 8/3/2014
OKAY THIS IS LIKE MY FIFTH REVIEW YOU HAD BETTER CONTINUE THE FANFIC OR I WILL BE FORCED TO DEAL WITH YOUUUU!
Shaylee chapter 23 . 8/2/2014
WHERE IS IT
Shaylee chapter 22 . 8/2/2014
No, you have to continue this one!
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