FYI. Your narration is bloody brilliant. I loved every word :)

Touching

it ended rather suddenly but still it was good fic. Sherlock worrying over what to do, being scared too was sweet. and for John to see that Sherlock cares that much was a very nice thing.
cutesy fic :)

I love how you show Sherlock unable to handle emotions well, but still wants to help John all the same. Love your innocent Johnlock cuddle too! This is adorable, sad, and heart-warming at the same time! Keep writing! :)

The way you write out Sherlock's thought process is brilliant. Just how he thinks and feels and makes connections between those and the real world... I can really imagine myself in his shoes, sort of, with how he thinks.

i loved this one!
well done!

So sad, but I loved the ending. Very well written!

Fantastic story - you managed to get realistic and platonic cuddling/affection (the best kind) into this story and it was great. Lovely job. Keep up the great work!

YOU GREAT WRITER YOU.

That was entirely appropriate and matched both their characters. :)

Favorited!

Oh well done. Perfect Sherlock.

This fic is honestly perfect. There is not one little thing I would change about it. You've got both John and Sherlock's personalities down to the ground. Beautiful!

Loved it!

This story is brilliant and exactly how Sherlock would react in that situation, I love it!

nawwww... write more... they're cute...

Wow. This was great. I really enjoyed sherlock's inner dialogue in this piece...and of course all of those adjustments and sifting of stimuli would happen rapid fire. I am keenly aware of how blank and utterly useless a genius looks when they are attempting to sort out the correct action in these sorts of situations (I have a couple of genius/psychopaths in my family) and it was really fun and exciting to be along for the ride.

Thanks ever so much for posting. Good flawless prose here. Delightful.