I’m soooo late, but I realy like it.

I really enjoyed it at first but Naruto's stupidly arrogant attitude just gets on my nerves. Mei is supposed to be a main character yet she has less scenes than Hanabi

These stupid arguments between Naruto and Mei are getting absolutely fucking ridiculous and i'm seriously considering to stop reading if this shit drags on

Naruto a sith

this fanfic is contending for the top 10 spots of all fanfics ive ever reaf

hoho im really anticipating what happens next

im interested in where this is all going

i was a bit worried where the Kushina imprisonment and torturr was going and how far itd go, but i like the explanation this chapter and the resolution especially

Aight, just wanted to mention a few things:
-As much as your interpretation makes sense, earth is water’s counter element, and lightning is earth’s counter element.
-Bucklers are small shields, where gauntlets are essentially plate gloves. Bucklers would be much more “big” or heavy duty than metal gloves.

Overall, even though I disagree with many key parts of your view of Konoha it’s quite a fun story. Definitely worth a serious gander, if any potential reader is seeing this!

So, is Mei eventually going to care for Naruto, or will she only ever see him the way Danzo sees him, as nothing more than a weapon, an asset to throw at their enemies?

Great story shame you stopped writing it

Very intriguing start. Can't wait to read more.

Its crap

Well, this was retarded. Are they members of a military corps or two stupid boys in a schoolyard? And of course, the jonin sensei, who are supposedly military commanders, allowed it to go unpunished.

This "build up hype" move turned into a pile of grade A stupidity.

To be honest ... This is crap. Literally shit. I don't even know how you can write this and think it was any good. Maybe you should just delete this and stop.