Wow... just, wow.

Can't say I 'enjoyed' the story, but it was compelling. Definitely something I could see happening between Tony & Pepper. Tigers can't change their stripes, however they can be trained - to an extent.

Would love to find out what happens with Tony; what his side of the story is.

Written really well, i can easily see it happening, :( Good ending as well.

That was so sad! But beautifully written. :'( I really hope your depressed mood goes away! Happy endings cheer me up :D Seriously though, I'm sorry for your sadness and if there's anything I can do let me know (: Smiles are sent to you!

-Person

I love, love, love this story even with the unhappily ever after! Call me evil but I enjoy a sad story, where nothing works out every once in awhile. Especially, when they are as plausible and well written as this. )

Great story.

very interesting.. I totally can see this happening as well. AS much as I love Tony, I find it hard to believe after his years of sleeping around that he could after a few years simply only want Pepper.. Great job.

:Sniff:: You made my heart hurt. I sure hope that was an awful dream or something hehee. You should continue:)

I hope your depressed mood lightens. There's always something to smile about in every day... even if its something small like the sun shining.

As far as the fic goes, it is quite believable. Pepper's voice is excellent, calm, controlled and thinking two or three steps ahead at all times.

As far as I see it. Pepper and Tony would only have two, very distinct, options: (1) happily ever after, or, (2) everything ending in tears. They are such strong-willed characters that I honestly can't see a middle ground for them.

Oh, and you made me smile today (see!) with Venice. I adore the city! Actually, I'm trying to convince my hubby-to-be that it would make a wonderful place for a honeymooon...

so, smile, just for me. Please?

Ah so sad. A part two with a much happier ending would be loved but not needed. This was beautiful.

Absolutely tragic (kudos to you though for fantastic writing). Still, I can't say that it's entirely implausible. As much as I love writing and reading fluff for these two, when you think about it there's a high probability that it'd never work out between them :/

:O! This story shocks me considering how much you love Pepperony! Ih pleasepleaseplease make another chapter, or a sequel! One with a happy ending! I'm not happy unless Tony and Pepper are happy, together:) Pleaseee:)