Aww! Good job!

loved it, mean it.

Wow. That's actually pretty heartwarming. Hits you right here, man. Have an internet cookie.

I am definitely reading more of your stories! Keep up the good work!

I guess is not normal to laugh for "If Nobodies could love, Roxas would love Axel." XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Beautiful *-*

Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

I got to say I haven't seen very many Roxas X Xion stories, and this one is a great story and is well written. You have done a great job.

-ShrillKillerdog

Very sweet. I like it! Excellent job! I hope you keep writing things like this! :D

Awww, this is so cute! I love you made Roxas kiss her forehead instead of her mouth. It wpuld have been too much and I believe everything needs to take time. Great story. I love your writing! :)

Very cute!

This is fantastic! I love it! Finally... someone who dosen't hate Xion. Ahem!

Great points

1- Emotion, I felt so bad for Xion when those mean voices were telling her she's worthless. I've been told that all my life so i felt her pain.

2- The whole AxelXXionXRoxas thing was not too fouceed on. You mentioned it silenced it and didn't keep it going.

3- the overall story just kicks major butt.

What i don't like

The only issue i wasen't sure if they kissed or not. usually when i guy is such a good sweet talker as Roxas was the girl kisses him. It did mention she kissed his coat but thats too childish for my liking a kiss on the cheek would of made this a perfect 10 out of 10.

Pleaes write more XionXRoxas stories.

And if you could please read my fiction as well.

T

Thank you.

THAT...WAS...WAS...WAS...SO BEAUTIFUL! yay another rokushi lover i can talk to, welcome to my rokushi club, where roxas and xion rule *note:roxas is mine forever, if u place on hand on him imma let out the saix puppy* hahalols read my fanfics if u like rokushi, most of them are rokushi

So sweet! v

cute... but wth was up with the things the voices were sayin? that was pure crack xD

cuteromaceticalsome keep it up

Wow five stars!