Please write a sequel! You have an amazing talent for writing.!

Yay happy ending! XD

Hey, awsome story. Just wondering, cant you please write more, its so good. please, please, please!

You know I always hated Reno. And this just made me hate him even more. Because I'm a Axel cosplayer and now when we go to comicon, I am not letting Reno get anywhere near my Roxas.

How the heck did he get his semen to taste like fruit? Semen is always salty. I've heard it can taste slightly better with a good diet, but not fruity.

Sorry, I'm just nitpicking. One thing that gets me about fanfics is the whole "You Fail Sex Ed Forever" Thing. People never remember a little thing called refractory period, which except for a select few men, means they have to take at least a short break before going at it again. You don't need to have sex to know this, it's everywhere on the internet (and no i don't mean porn XD ).

Other than that, good story I guess. It stays true to the rape mentality, although I'm curious to see where it goes. I have a new found respect and sympathy for rape vicitms, because the first time you have sex, it hurts. It's a pain that a lot of girls are unprepared for, sometimes to the point that it can scare them away from every having sex again. I can only imagine how horrible it is with a person who doesn't care about you and your feelings at all. ]

omg so sad.. D; but awesome smut~~ I have a fetish for non-con too actually~ XDD glad I found this~ XDD

Oh godRoxas u poor baby! D: Amazing... Freaking amazing...

Where's the epic fight scene? -pout- Adorbs btw ;D

Wow. Just all sorts of wow. It's hard to express how wonderful that was considering the rape part. Like..rape and wonderful shouldn't be in the same sentence together an all.. but damn. That was so well written. legit.

oh god i want to kill Reno so much.

but i'm glad Axel was there to make Roxas fell better

XD I loved the ending omfg. I totally need to throw my Reno figure to make myself feel better. RENO YOU'RE A DOUCHE. Never thought I'd say that! LOOKWHATYOU'VEDONETOME!

:D ANYWAYS! Very well-written. No major grammar mistakes, really strong verbage, and great word-selection. I could really feel the emotions the characters were experiencing.

Awesome job, Ki-chan! 3

AWWWW, CAP LOCKS ATTACK IS COMING ON.

THIS IS SO SWEET. I LOVE THE MAKE UP SEX OR WHATEVER YOU CALL IT. IT'S JUST INCREDIBLE. I MEAN, IT IS FILLED WITH ANGST AND IT WAS SAD... BUT.. THE SEX WAS INCREDIBLE. :) IT'S REALLY GREAT. YOU'RE A SUPER GOOD WRITER. -SNIFFS- THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE MUCH ENJOYABLE READING TONIGHT. I REALLY HOPE YOU WILL WRITE MORE AKUROKURENO SOON. JUST PLEASE PLEASE NOW AKURENO. XD LOL, I HATE THAT PAIRING.

ok, caps lock off.

lol, sorry about that. You are just such a great writer! seriously. you are OZOM!

You never cease to amaze me with your writing. HOnestly. I stalk your page every once in a while and I never regret it. Your writing is still as slick as ever. As hot as ever. The rape scene was so sad. The Roxas talking to Axel scene was also so sad that my eyes begin to sting a bit. -pouts- this is really well written though. I love it! Another of your story to put in my favs! 8D

This is really cute. I can't wait for more!

Omg, that made me cry and there are only a few stories in the world that make me cry. That was beautiful and brillant. *appluads* That was just...too good for words... I love it!