This was very well written and enjoyable. Thank you for the experience- I loved seeing them written this way.

It had impact, showed a great understanding of the characters. Great work.

this fanfic is absolutely amazing! Its the best i've ever read because of how i can imagine the characters thinking and doing all this! the other fanfic, have the charactors acting completely off! I love this!

That was amazing, how easily this story could've been threaded into the canon plot. Great work! \o/

Wonderful. That's all I can say.

O_O i... i...

i can't believe how in chara everyone is! it's so strange to see serious Yamamoto, let alone the TYL one! and i love that you wrote some pre-story to that arc/demension. TYL Gokudera practically reverting back to his teenage self is a good sign of his grief.

and wow, the ending! it's nice to see Yamamoto's figured something out, that there's something more to this.

Beautiful. This is actually a very good explanation of why TYL!Gokudera reacted the way he did at the very beginning of the Future Arc. And I think your portrayal of Tsuna as an emotional rock for Gokudera and Yamamoto, if not all of the Guardians, was very good.

Hurray! Another KHR story from you, dealing with the TYL incident about Tsuna dying. After reading two amazing stories about this stuff from you I now need to write a story myself. XD Like last time I luved this one! I like how you wrote Yamamoto and Gokudera. They're so in character and it's just so enjoyable to read. I think more and more people need to write about this kind of stuff, rather than figuring out how they can get who and who together romantically. Seriously, it's like the only types of stories on here! Anyway, thank you again for writing another story and I think I'll just going to have to put you on alert now, to read any other future KHR fics. XD

wow. i'm utterly speechless. this is beautifully written, and the words are painful to read, powerful.

how the story progresses, with yamamoto unable to understand, gokudera's utter belief that he has to stay at his boss' side, and tsuna's words that at start might have felt so wrong...

wow, really. it was paced perfectly, and i really liked reading it.

and despite the ending that still offers hope, yamamoto's last thoughts were quite bittersweet. :)

SOY

Very nicely done ;3 I love how you captured everything and kept all the characters IC. Write more!

I have to agree that this was an amazingly well written gen-fic. Everyone was so IC, it really made it plausible. ) I can totally imagine a heart-broken Gokudera watching over Tsuna's casket (although I do wonder how he survives that long without eating, unless wild game pops up in front of him xD).

The conversation between Gokudera and Tsuna while Tsuna is "dying" is touchingly sad / I liked it alot.

And the Yamamoto is so level headed~~ )

I loved it 3 It gave me tingles~ (I even tweeted about it! ) Keep up the great work!

Dfksdopdieufcj. OMFGTHISWASTHEBEST! I adored it. Gen is so rarely done and this made me melt. I always thought it was off of Tsuna to leave Gokudera and Yamamoto in the dark like that and I love how you captured that turmoil he caused and dklsddiorfiogfiogf. Pure win on your part.