| Reviews for A Bird in the Hand |
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   JoinTheHunt1981 chapter 4 . 1/20/2012 Wow! I really enjoyed this! I see it's TBC...Are you going to update it! I hope so! xxx |
| Jazzola chapter 4 . 5/22/2011 This was great! Wish there was more, but brilliant, dramatic, twisty writing. Thanks for posting this. Jazzola :) |
| Deweynumbers chapter 4 . 12/3/2010 Thanks for this. Just read chapters 1-4 in one gulp (so to speak!) and enjoyed it all. World Cup standard smut and all perfectly in character. Delightful dialogue. Brilliant. |
| Bollyknickers92 chapter 4 . 9/23/2010 loveeeeeeeeeee ittttttt ALL OF IT. EVERY CHAPTER haha sorry! but yeahh really really liked it! got their characters perfect! more pleaseee? :D xx |
| theHuntgoeson chapter 4 . 9/19/2010 Hot passion intertwined with the awkward, hesitant development of their feelings for one another - great. Glad to see there's more to, er, come. |
| SuperCali chapter 4 . 9/17/2010 Wow, steamy. Great update and character interactions! |
| CountessDocula chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 LOL Ms Orton! Shredded underwear ;O) Another HOT chapter - I need a dark room to lie down in... Gen X |
| sillygenie chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 Gorgeous descriptions and very hot. Love a vulnerable Gene and a sexy Alex. I particularly liked the snapshot of her life with Pete. A brilliant bit of writing. |
| Malena Hunt chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 That was really hot! Well done. :) |
| theoofoof chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 Really good. I love the way you've not made their relationship overly fluffy, yet we still get to see Gene's vulnerability. Can't wait for more of this. :D |
| mellyc chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 Wow Mrs Orton, that was HOT HOT HOT! You've written the characters of Gene and Alex perfectly, I love the glimpse of the 'real' Gene and his vulnerability at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter! xx |
| EscapedLunatic chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 Another brilliant chapter, Ms Orton - definitely worth the wait! I loved Gene's vunerability, and you've managed to get some great lines in there. One of me favs: 'Well most of my underwear is shredded, I've practically screamed myself hoarse and tomorrow I'll probably be walking like John Wayne. Does that answer your question?' ;) And, of course, the smut was hawt! More soon please - or I'll have to resort to the poking stick ;) EL xx |
| MrsCakeLady chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 Yet another fab chapter Ms Orton! Can't wait to read the next one. MCL xx |
| superrvixen chapter 4 . 9/13/2010 Great chapter! Gene's vulnerability was adorable! Would love to see how the pair carry on from here :) |
| morethanjust-a-fairytale chapter 4 . 9/12/2010 Great chapter :) really enjoyed it :) thought the awkward conversation at the end really showed how they felt :) can't wait for the next update xxx |
