Reviews for Parallels |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/13 Beautiful! Extremely beautiful! |
CamTheThief chapter 1 . 7/6 Very, very well written one-shot. A part of me wishes I could see it as a full-story, but on the other hand I love just how poetic this brief snapshot is on its own. Brilliant. |
TeeRead chapter 1 . 5/3 no words... 100% I need more! |
MayaviPanchi chapter 1 . 9/12/2019 Beautiful. SOUL SATISFYING. |
wolfd890 chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 great use of description to give the reader a feel for the setting. I'm imagining the breeze, the glow of the street lights playing and moving on the walls. It reminds me of lazy summer evenings. thanks for sharing. |
A Voodoo Gypsy chapter 1 . 7/19/2019 Good fluffs |
Have a Little Feith chapter 1 . 2/4/2019 I just wish there were more details, like it actually going into the smut, either their first time, or actually showing their second. As it stands, it got hyped up, only to leave us, the readers, hanging. That having been said, I enjoyed the story itself. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2018 Awesome, simply awesome Thanks |
Foy the Snooze Button chapter 1 . 4/14/2018 It's great! Not too indecently explicit but detailed enough. Thank you, even though you may not see my review. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2017 This is entirely plausible. Heartbreaking, sweet, well written. I'd really quite love to see more of these tragic souls. |
Someone chapter 1 . 6/19/2017 I think Abigail Potter flows better than Anna Potter don't you? |
GG chapter 1 . 7/13/2016 Mind doing more |
Okumura Hikari chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 Great story! I enjoyed reading it :) |
Axcel chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 I wouldn't mind reading a full fic of this touching plot. Oh, wow, I made a pun! |
HeavenlyOmega chapter 1 . 12/28/2015 Beautiful. Are there any other stories like this? Serious Scribble's Sister, Mine seems to be leaning in this direction, but it never got very far. |