Reviews for Fortunate Son
MaxsMusings chapter 1 . 6/9
Oh my goodness! What a story. The raw emotion. Peter wanting to bridge the gap both physically and emotionally. The rough imagery of the injuries both physical and mental!

Wow! Thank you for such an awesome couple nights of reading!
Moni Hasnone chapter 1 . 4/13
Somehow, I found your version of Neal’s history far more entertaining than the actual history present in the show. I like how vague but detailed it was, and your writing style is phenomenal. Thank you!
brandywine737 chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
Nice story and well written.
Heather Snow chapter 1 . 1/16/2019
This was really good. Love Peter and Neal facing a disaster together.
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 9/24/2018
Very good
Just the right amount of emotion between them
emeraldarrows chapter 1 . 8/20/2018
Lovely story!
cosette141 chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
I can’t believe I never reviewed this before—this is one of the first fanfics I ever read. I found it years ago and have read it at least ten times since. I love it so much. You capture them so perfectly. The hurt comfort in this is BEAUTIFUL and perfect and wonderful. You are fantastic and thank you SO MUCH for this story! I know for sure i’ll be back :)
Iuvsbruce chapter 1 . 4/11/2018
This was wonderful! I love the men of White Collar and love how you captured them perfectly! Thank you so much!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2018
This is so well written! It would be amazing to read another WC story from you!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
This was really nice.
Legoelf chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Love love love. That's all I can say ahhhhh
grishy chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
Great story; I think I like more your version of Neal past than the series.
JimChou chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
That was really good for the relation you show between the characters, even if Neal's past is now AU. I loved it a lot. How sad you haven't written another story for White Collar; it would surely be great!
Ihatechoosinganame chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
Extremely well written
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
This was very good. I loved Peter's reflection that 'Neal had a spark'. That is so absolutely accurate and central to all that Neal is, very good. I liked Neal's telling Peter 'not everyone has a safety net'. That was very good. Thanks for writing, this was a nice story with the perfect ending.
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