Awww... That's adorable and germy at the same time 3 haha I love the plot of the story, and you do have a bit of grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that... AWESOMEE -gives appreciation cookie-

Bahaha! I definitely laughed when Namine finally realized that her gum was gone :P

Aha, because you'd sooo wear something sexy to a formal gathering...actually that could happen lol there are sexy dresses that look formal too~ Anyway! Great chapter, the thing with Kairi was quite suspicious lol wonder what'll happen~

Awwwwwww~! That was just chalk full of Roxas and Namine love~ Roxas' gum obsession is making me crave some now though lol. Since I have braces on my mom keeps telling me I can't eat gum anymore whenever I ask her; I eat some anyway because my friends ALWAYS have a pack of gum with them. Great job!

I KNEW IT! HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!

Aww cute. Nice job on this.

aww, that was cute. great story :)

this is a really cute story )

the best thing about roxas and namine is that you can make their relationship so sweet and fluffy...and for some reason it'll still make them seem in-character, even if it's an AU. i guess they're just so flexible to work with, haha.

great work, and thanks for an enjoyable read )