I don't really get this story! But it's a good story

Hahah I laughed at the end, Sumire Yome likes this.

That. WAS SO DARN CUTE~

Oh, and I've read Chapter 1-6 before, but I haven't read this yet. And I haven't even reviewed.

So shameful of me. TTATT

I love them all, though my favorite would probably be the one where Koko gives Sumire dogs and a proposal on her birthday. (I'm sorry. I'm too lazy to check what chapter that was)

Iwannareadmore~ :D

Lols XD I really liked it. It was really sweet, and really sad, the way that Baby Koko said bye to Sumire-the-dog. It was also very interesting that Sumire the girl's previous life had been as a dog...or, at least, that's what I got from the story - I liked it because it shows where her Alice came from XD Very well done, except for TWO things. Koko name is Kokoroyomi, or Mindreader. He was never given a formal name in the manga or the anime. In the English translation of the manga, they named him Kokoro Yome (Heart Bride) because it seemed he needed a first and last name, but he only ever had a family name, which was Kokoroyomi...which actually technically means "heart reader" but it translates into mindreader XD The other thing is this: While Yuki and Yuuki are two different names, they're pronounced almost exactly the same way, and I can't imagine parents deciding to name two children that. Apart from that, though, it was wonderful. The story was very sweet, and the grammar! You made me so happy with it! You had NO MISTAKES, Jonzz-san. None. At. All. It was a wonderful feeling to see no mistakes in your writing - This gets a favorite for no mistakeswonderful story XD

Oh my gosh so cute! I smiled the entire time. I love facebook fics! And lol Koko, I almost didn't notice what his big surprise was. And Ruka, he seems so confident in this one. And Nastume, just sweet all over!

Hehehe, once again I DID read the last chapter just too lazy :P Great chapter me wants more!

'Like the time Kitsu cheated on Anna with a mop.'... LMAO! Where are you getting these things XD! Just to say I did read the last chapter just I couldn't be bothered reviewing coz it's 1:11 am... Ah! I should make a wish : D *wishes* Next chapter~

Huwahhhh... I said I'd read the next chapter and here I am! Everything I said about the last chapter is basically the same... only I buckled with laghter at this one XD I can't choose a favourite line 'cause their all absolutely hilarious :L! Next chapter~

I was shaking with laughter reading this. My favourite sentance? Ummm, let's see, "I'm going to be screwed too, I could say. Too bad the word has so many meaning, and the best one of them.. is all mine!" That's just too amusing :L I love Komire to bits and I've been waiting for someone to make a collection : D Arigatou! Im away to read another chapter !

LAWL. I love how Mikan is so...dense. "Who's this Mikan Sakpsfsdfsf?" and "Ooh! Can I join you?"

You really portrayed the characters well too

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY :3

LOLZ

So cute~~

Can't wait for next chapter~~

-MM6

Ah this story is so CUTE! You deserve more reviews:)

1. You had a mistake near the end. A mistake that you've made before. You used "his" instead of "her" again. Remember that "his" is only for guys, and "her" is only for girls. If the word comes after the object, then it has an "s" on the end. (Ex. Those keys are hers). Now, apart from that, THIS IS AWESOME! It was SOOOOOOOOO good! It was really sweet, and I thought it MIGHT be a dream since you were throwing girls out the window (you never know, with fan fics. It could have been meant as real life - scary thought, huh?), so that was a good choice. You made it seem like it could have been AU or a dream, which is a really good way to write dreams, if you're going to have the person wake up. Also, I LOVED the end. One, because that was totally Sumire's character. Two, because it was completely Koko's character. Three, because it was just so sweet and wonderful and it was...was...KYAAAAA SUBARASHI! Sorry, English words cannot express just how wonderful I thought that was. But "subarashi" kinda means "wonderful" or "amazing"...but not really...It's kind of one of those words that has no real translation - Anyway, your story was amazing...really, just wonderful. I can't wait until the next chapter of this, or the next chapter of Love Trap. Ganbatte kudosai! (Polite way of saying "good luck")

I love how you made it a video game! Btw can I borrow that concept? I hope you keep writing!

Haha this is so funny! I love how Luna was thrown out the window and that Mikan just kept talking and talking...and then Hotaru was like, "Just take me to Ruka already."

This really put a smile on my face.

*makes Husky swim to finland with a truckful of chocolate*

I LOVE CHOCOLATE SO MUCH! IT'S LIKE THE BEST THING IN THE WORLD AND EVERYONE SHOULD GET FREE CHOCOLATE EVERYDAY AND I LIKE MILK CHOCOLATE AND WHITE CHOCOLATE BUT DARK CHOCOLATE'S GOOD TOO SOMETIMES IF ITS NOT TOO BITTER AND I-

Ahem.

Great job!

~Wings~