Reviews for A Chibi Tale of Beginnings
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
That was adorable
Dbzgirl chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
Please make more chibi adventures!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I really like your stories about the chibis adventure! Please post more!
caamy chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
hahahah is very cool
Megumi007 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I love your fic, it was very funny and tender worship him and hopefully write more please *-*
ndesi62 chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
"Goten wins!"

Lol, nice story. Also, does this mean Trunks & Marron have the same birthday?
HabsGirl31 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
LOL, that's hilarious and sooo cute! Although we all know she'll end up with Trunks ;) Great story!
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Aww, this is so cute. Goten is the most adorable of the bunch in this story. How cute that Trunks and Marron have the same birthday. If they do become a couple later on that will be a fun day for them to share. I love sweet, family stories and this one is absolutely amazing. Good work.
Rozozzy chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
This is so cute. I love Goten's moments in here. I used to be a TP fan, but now it's really weird to me. G/M and T/M forever!

Fav'd.
xSkipperrx chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Aw!Its soooo cute! I love how Goten is telling everyone to look at the baby and when Marron started to grab Trunks' hair he said no baby no! Is this a WAFF? You know stories that give you that Warm And Fuzzy Felling (WAFF!) inside of you? Cause thats how I felt inside!:)
chocolateblood chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Who knew that the lack of a nose in childhood can snag you an awesomely hot boyfriend... Kind of makes me wish I was a noseless wonder too lol not . not really . honest! . We need noses, right?
Bob's cookie chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Wait, I just realized...Marron's birth "ruined" Trunks's birthday party. Does that mean they're birthday twins?

(Haha it's still me. I had to leave an "anonamous review" since FF won't let ya review twice to one chapter/story. :( Those meanies..) xD
Bob's cookie chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
WARNING: Another long review..

I CAN'T BELiEVE I AiN'T READ THiS YET!

Goku being there kinda messes up the plot, I mean..I love Goku, but isn't he dead? xD

Marron is so...MAGIC? Only logical description that comes to mind. I mean, she didn't have a nose until she was what, fifteen? And her eyes were black in DBZ then they magically turned blue in GT. Weird..

But I love Trunks/Goten/Marron stories! Especially CHIBI Trunks/Goten/Marron stories! Best Dragonball trio! I love them!

-"Goten is quite the charmer, unlike his brother. He got that from Goku, for sure." Chi-Chi smiled as Goten bubbled.

"I don't see what's so cute about him," Trunks sneered. "Mom when can I open my presents?" (Trunks is such a little brat; jealous of Goten's adorableness no doubt! xD)

-"Where is that woman?" Trunks demanded, moments later, after all of his other presents were torn into and dominated by the demi-saiyan. "I want my presents!"

"Shut up, brat," Vegeta yelled at his son. Trunks sighed and glared down at the floor, fighting back the tears in his eyes. Bulma cursed at Vegeta and grabbed him by the ear into another room for a little talk about 'human parenting' and not 'super saiyan parenting.' Goten got upset that his friend was upset and started crying at the commotion. (Awe, chibi Goten just melts me.. U)

-"Marron-chan." Bulma cooed at the infant. "She is so beautiful!" Chi-Chi gazed at the little baby over Bulma's shoulder.

"I want one." They both said, together.

"Mom, I'm bored," Trunks pouted in the corner. (I seriously laughed at this. xD) Bulma shot a glare at her son. "Is that the little brat who spoiled my birthday party?"

"Hold Marron for a moment, Chi-Chi." Bulma gave the infant to her friend and went to go scold her son.

"Okaasan, Goten see baby?" Chi-Chi's youngest tugged gently on his mother's pant leg. She smiled down at the toddler and sat in the chair, so Goten could peer over and see Marron. Goten stood on his tip toes and caught a glimpse of the child. He started giggling and ran to Gohan. "Niisan, see baby. Tousan, see baby." Goten dragged the men to see his new friend. As Goku glanced over Marron, he got a weird look on his face.

(EVERY SINGLE GOTEN PART JUST MAKES ME WANNA GO HUG SOMETHING! XDDD)

-"So, you want to kiss boys Trunks? There is nothing wrong with that." Juu joked to the child. (BEST PART EVER! xDDD)

That..ending..just OMG! I almost died of cuteness! Chibi Goten especially but OMG! The whole TrunksxMarron speculation and then Goku OF COURSE has to pair GOTEN with Marron instead. Haha. But seriously, this story was a total win. U

Very cute, clever, frickin' adorable, and so funny.. And best of all the characters were in character!

Man, I love your stories! You are so talented! Seriously, reading your stuff always makes me smile. U

And yes, "Goten wins!" xD Haha. But not Marron, he gets Palace. Trunks will eventually see the light and fall in love with Marron. (nod) Yep!
artemis road chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
oh my god how cute!

it was meant to be since the first glance haha,

trunks and marron forever!
vulgarite succulent chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I think I read this when I went to GTM a few years ago, which shouldn't be a surprise to anyone lol, but back to this fic. So cute! I always love a good TM fic and the chibi-ness is always an added bonus. Marron's nose is an unexplained mystery to us fans. haha. More please!
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