that was brilliant. absolutely freaking brilliant. emotions were created, ties to the characters, however, umm, not being rude, badly spelt words were. but the excellence of the story and personality of the characters makes up for that. the rewrite is good, however shored, and obviously better written, your writing ability has vastly improved, and your ability to spell the word 'shall'. like I said this is amazing, and just... wow. :) - Cesca

whooooooooooooooooooooo

Artemis swore to be an eternal maiden along with Hestia and Athena. That means no kids! Artemis has no kids! She just has her hunters

One thing: you will go far. I've never read anything like it. . .

Good i guess?

I look forward to the sequel. I assume there will be one?

Have to give James credit, not wishing to hurt those he loved and vanishing...

! bad Thanatous has to die now! how could he do such things to willow and his dad! :'( aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I cant wait to see how the biggest fight goes with james and Thanatous!

*punches a hole through the computer screen* THAT WAS FOR U THANATOUS! HOPE THAT HURT LIKE HECK!

haha! sry bout that *guilty smile* im just so into this story i love it to death! lol!

well really cant wait fo the next (and hopefuly not last) chapter! haha!

omg! dawsome chapter! loved the action! haha!

U no what! I just realized what diana reminds me of! cause i was like for a month "what does that remind me of! its on the tip of my toung!" well I suddenly realized it while reading Maximum Ride! its the voice insede maxes head! haha! if u dont know what im talking about, U should read the series! (the first book is the angel experiment btw)

well she had a voive inside her head that would always guide her and warn her about stuff and help her in fights! haha! it was killing me until now!

anyway i can relate to u about how writers block sux! i mean i havent been able to because i was having trouble with a certain person, not going to tell cause im going to update soon, but it was mostly because i kept deleting the chapter after i wrote it like 100 times!

well cant wait for the next one! and ill try to get mine up as soon as possible (if i dont delete it again!) haha!

wow that was a long review!

Just to make sure, your characters us an OC right?

Seems interesting. I thnk you need a beta or proofreader, there are a lot of spelling errors.

Rate 7.2/10

Your story didn't have a proper introduction and you just jumped into the plot, it's confusing.

Sorry I didn't log in to review

Hey great chapters.

I like the idea of James been the son of Orion and Artemis. And your explanation on how Orion was reborn is really good and believable so it makes perfect sense.

Can't wait to see how this book is going to end and also I want to know what James is going to do with Willow and Jill, I'm curious. Well seeya.

Excellent fight scene. It's a wonderI'm able to read this, what with the recent problems fanfiction has been having.

Oh I love the realization that Orion(reincarnated) is James' father.

yay! dawesome chapter! finally diana (did i spell her name rite?) is tamed! haha! no i now think shes sweet! aww! ma fav character! haha! well cant wait for you next chapter! update soon! well I shouldnt b sayin that cause i havent updated in like 2 months, but MY COUMPUTER IS BEING A BUTT AND KEEPS DELETING MY STORY! it gets tireing typeing the same thing over, and over again! well going back to typin!

good job on the chapter and i cant wait for the next one.