Great story! I really enjoyed reading it. Also, I get the feeling that Charlie is about to have a breakthrough in his Cognitive Emergence Theory.

Fantastic story - enjoyed the way you develop the characters. Schiller was scary, twisted and evil and yet somehow evoked sympathy as you read his history

I don't understand how I haven't reviewed this (I thought I had), since I've enjoyed reading this a few times at least. My apologies for the delayed "I loved it" comment.

Your plots are so ingenious and so well laid out. I love how your mind works. Thank you so much and God bless you!

What an amazing story I have been fully engrossed in the characterization of the family I would loved to have seen it as a two part episode well done

Wow! Simply wonderful! The plot was excellent-so well thought out, so spellbinding I had to read the entire story in one sitting! The heck with eating! Characters were so spot on. Besides the excellent criminal case, you also focused on the one thread that ran thru the show-the developing relationship of the brothers Eppes. Tears formed as I read the last few chapters when the family truly revealed the closeness and love they had for each other.

Wonderful, wonderful!

This was a great story! So many twists and turns. It was interesting how you wrote it/put it together- you could see everyone at once, almost as if this had been a Numb3rs movie instead of an episode. But it worked out great! Thanks for sharing.

I was re-watching Numb3rs the other day and I decided I might as well see if there were any good fanfictions for the show. I am beyond thrilled that this was the first one I read. Your story was amazing and I loved the way you switched between everyone's point of view. When it went back to Ludwig's brother's POV I was slightly confused as to why but when I realized what was going on I loved the idea. What made me even more happy is that you kept the characters well, in character. I could completely picture all of the conversations between the different characters. Larry stayed Larry and would go off about Einstein and the teasing between Colby, David, and the rest of the team was perfect. You are a fabulous writer and had my full attention throughout the whole story. ~

Ok, I love this story so far (chap. 3), and I wanna say one thing- Jenson Ackerman sounds kinda like Jensen Ackles. :3

This story was amazing! It had me hooked very early on and kept the tension building. The extraneous details and causal conversations were believable and really added depth to the story, even the OC's had character. I really loved it and enjoyed my time procrastinating by reading it. Thanks!

ahhhhhhhh! I loved this so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much! It was AWESOME! It was so captivating and i couldn't stop thinking about it! I loved all of the hurt Charlie! and hurt Don! and the way you did the professor was muy magnificent! I so wish it didn't end! But i still loved how you ended it, great great great job!

I Thank you for such a suspenseful, Terror filled and a Redemptive Story! Kudos! It was an amazing ride.

Your story was absolutely riveting. The way you built up tension was smooth and well-done; the ending was touching and nicely finished; and the entire story was chocked full of perfect, clever and well-placed details. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. It was an excellent read.

very good story. I quite enjoyed it and i really feel you did a great job in writing it. You moved at a good pace through the story and didnt rush it and i feel that added to it. Great job man.

I love it! You have the brother's banter to a tee. I can't wait to read your next one! I hope you keep writing! You have a great talent! Thank you for sharing your story and talent with all of us on the site!

Britt