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  Guest chapter 4 . 2/27 I need more |
| Seriousaddicted chapter 4 . 6/14/2019 Love this story! I searched lots of "dark Harry" fanfics, but this one really is well written, and i can't wait to read what's next! Hope you update soon :) |
 Azenor Lestrange chapter 4 . 6/12/2018 Two days after discovering your story and I find out you're rewriting it. I'm SO happy! These four chapters were very promising and original. It was a bit obvious that the house-elf had been manipulated to give Harry the book on Blood Magic but other than that I love it. I can't wait for you to post! |
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 4 . 6/11/2018 Harry doesn't even know of Legilimency? Dumbledore has failed to educate Harry. Snape, alarmed, broken. Severus Snape knows better than others what the Dark Mark entails. I did think that house elf "finding" one more book is suspect. Why would blood magic be forbidden? Especially when Harry uses his own blood, and not somebody's else. Nobody is destined to become evil, not even Voldemort. Granted, some traits may be genetical, like eye colour, hair colour, height, muscles, hormones, temper... But nurture means just as much, if not more. Instead of going into dark spells, it might have worked better to summon sharp objects onto the shield. Or to transfigure Voldemort's clothes into thorns, if Transfiguration can make it through the shield. Or use a sound attack, something so loud that Voldemort's ears bleed. Or transfigure something into a gun - surely, shield cannot stop the bullets? Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck. |
| Timeless number 1 chapter 4 . 10/8/2015 OMG! I love this story. Please update! |
| Timeless number 1 chapter 2 . 10/7/2015 Wow. This is intense. Very beautifully written. It's been a long time since I felt such deep emotion for anyone, let alone a fictional character. I love this story. |
| serpentineheart chapter 3 . 3/22/2015 I really love this fic! Such an great idea and I have never seen a fic like this before. Please, please update! :) It would make my day, my life, if you did :) |
| Riddletobien chapter 4 . 5/5/2014 This is a promising start, I'm sorry that you didn't or couldn't continue it. Thanks for writing! |
| TwoSoulsEntwined chapter 4 . 2/2/2014 This is a really good story! Hope you will update! |
| Bochord of Leaspell chapter 4 . 12/24/2013 Oh, that has to HURT. Nice work. |
| Albettina chapter 4 . 11/29/2013 Pleaseee update! |
| serpentineheart chapter 4 . 9/30/2013 Please update this story, it is so good! So please, please dont abandon it. |
| LadyFlorentine chapter 4 . 6/6/2013 Your fic is fantastic. I can't wait to read more :) |
| IAMGinny chapter 4 . 5/28/2013 please update! |
| Renyo chapter 4 . 1/14/2013 I know it's been a long time since you updated, but this is so good! The relationship between Harry and Voldemort is realistic, and my it is dark indeed. I hope a update will be around the corner! Thank you for sharing this story. |
